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3、学习目标,了解作者的生平与本诗的写作背景,把握诗歌内容。(难点) 体会诗歌的语言美,理解作者的情感。(重点) 培养阅读诗歌的兴趣,体味生命的美好。(重点),作者名片,林徽因(19041955),原名徽音,福建闽县(今福州)人,建筑师、作家、新月派诗人,建筑师梁思成的妻子。中华人民共和国国徽的设计者之一。她是中国第一位女性建筑学家,被胡适誉为“中国一代才女”。林徽因文学作品甚多,代表作有你是人间的四月天,短篇小说九十九度中等。,林徽因,参与国徽设计,天安门人民英雄纪念碑设计,抢救改造传统景泰蓝,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成
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5、才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,写作背景,你是人间的四月天是林徽因的经典诗作,最初发表于学文一卷一期(1934年4月5日)。关于本诗的
6、创作意图,有两种说法:一是为悼念徐志摩而作,一是为儿子的出生而作。学术界一般认为是林徽因写给儿子梁从诫的。以表达心中对儿子的希望和儿子出生带来的喜悦。,文体知识,新月派及新月诗“新月派”是现代新诗史上一个重要的诗歌流派,主张新诗应具备音乐美、绘画美、建筑美三个美学标准。该诗派大体上以1927年为界分为前后两个时期。前期自1926年春始,代表人物有徐志摩、闻一多、胡适、梁实秋、朱湘等。他们,提倡新格律诗,主张“理性节制情感”,反对滥情主义和诗的散文化倾向。1927年春,“新月派”的主要活动转移到上海,这是后期新月派。后期新月派提出“健康”“尊严”的原则,坚持超功利的、自我表现的、贵族化的“纯诗”
7、立场,讲求“本质的醇正、技巧的周密和格律的谨严”,诗的艺术表现、抒情方式与现代派趋近。,字词,娉婷( ) 鲜妍( ) 冠冕( ) 呢喃( ),yn,pn,un min,n nn,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状
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9、元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,词语解释。,轻灵:动作轻巧灵活,也指一种轻松、飘逸的心境。 娉婷:形容女子的姿态美。 鲜妍:鲜艳。 冠冕:文中是王冠的意思。冕,古代天子、诸侯、卿、大夫所戴的礼帽,后来专指帝王的礼帽。 呢喃:拟声词,形容燕子的叫声。,我说你是人间的四月天; 笑响点亮了四面风;轻灵 在春的光艳中交舞着变。你是四月早天里的云烟, 黄昏吹着风的软,星子在 无意中闪,细雨点洒在花前。,那轻,那娉婷,你是,鲜妍 百花的冠冕你戴着,你是 天真,庄
10、严,你是夜夜的月圆。雪化后那片鹅黄,你像;新鲜 初放芽的绿,你是;柔嫩喜悦, 水光浮动着你梦期待中白莲。你是一树一树的花开,是燕 在梁间呢喃,你是爱,是暖, 是希望,你是人间的四月天!,你是人间的四月天,指梁从诫(林徽因与梁思成之子),春天中的盛季,一年中最珍贵的季节。,将“你”比作“人间的四月天”,新颖别致,暗含作者对儿子出生的喜悦以及对儿子的珍爱、希望。,整体感知,我说你是人间的四月天; 笑响点亮了四面风;轻灵 在春的光艳中交舞着变。,你是四月早天里的云烟, 黄昏吹着风的软,星子在 无意中闪,细雨点洒在花前。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才
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13、雪化后那片鹅黄,你像;新鲜 初放芽的绿,你是;柔嫩喜悦 水光浮动着你梦期待中白莲。,你是一树一树的花开,是燕 在梁间呢喃,你是爱,是暖, 是希望,你是人间的四月天!,我说你是人间的四月天; 笑响点亮了四面风;轻灵 在春的光艳中交舞着变。,诗歌讲解,将_拟人化,_在春的光艳中交舞着变。将“你”的轻灵、活泼,“我”的欢快、喜悦写得形象生动。,“笑响”,“笑响”,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,
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15、状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,生动形象地写出了“你”笑声的清亮与悦耳,表现了作者内心的欣喜以及对儿子的喜爱。,有着怎样的表达效果?,我说你是人间的四月天; 笑响点亮了四面风;轻灵 在春的光艳中交舞着变。,你是四月早天里的云烟, 黄昏吹着风的软,星子在 无意中闪,细雨点洒
16、在花前。,将“你”带来的温暖写得形象生动,表达了诗人由衷的喜悦之情。,找出本体和喻体,并分析作者所表达的感情。,本体,喻体,将静态的“星星”在朦胧的“云烟”中若隐若现的情形写的具体可感,突出了“星子”的动态感,形象生动。,有着怎样的表达效果?,你是四月早天里的云烟, 黄昏吹着风的软,星子在 无意中闪,细雨点洒在花前。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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18、成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,那轻,那娉婷,你是,鲜妍 百花的冠冕你戴着,你是 天真,庄严,你是夜夜的月圆。,应为“你是那轻,那娉婷,鲜妍”,突出了“你”“轻”“娉婷”的特点。使读者感受到作者内心的欣喜之情。,这句话有什么特点?有什么作用?,雪化后那片鹅黄,你像;新鲜 初放芽的绿,你是;柔嫩喜悦, 水光浮动着
19、你梦期待中白莲。,写出“你”新生时的娇嫩与美好。,倒装句,写出“你”的柔嫩与生气。,雪化后那片鹅黄,你像;新鲜 初放芽的绿,你是;柔嫩喜悦, 水光浮动着你梦期待中白莲。,本节诗歌中的哪些词语描写了“你”的颜色?说说它们带给你的阅读感受。,它们都是明亮的暖色,给人温润的美感,让人感到温暖、生机与希望。,鹅黄,绿,白,你是一树一树的花开,是燕 在梁间呢喃,你是爱,是暖, 是希望,你是人间的四月天!,直接表明“我”对“你”满怀希望,同时也表明“你”的新生给“我”带来了新的希望。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状
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21、元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,你是一树一树的花开,是燕 在梁间呢喃,你是爱,是暖, 是希望,你是人间的四月天!,与诗的开篇遥相呼应,更加强烈地表现出了作
22、者对“你”的赞美与喜爱之情。,你是人间的四月天,再读诗歌,说一说:诗歌的每一节分别赞美了什么。,第一节:赞美“你”的_。 第二节:赞美“你”的_。 第三节:赞美“你”的_。 第四节:赞美“你”的_。 第五节:赞美“你”的_。,轻灵、光艳,轻盈、柔美与恬静,庄重、美好,新鲜柔嫩,爱,暖和希望,深入探究,1.试分析诗歌第14节的结构特点。,本诗第1至4节句式结构基本相同,形成复沓、对称的乐章;将心中的爱以一幅幅四月天丰美的画面作比,节奏明快;排比的句式将画面连接,情感如水面涟漪层层叠叠,荡漾起伏。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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25、了“衬韵”的作用。“你”字的每一次出现,歌颂四月天,不仅是在向“你”倾诉,是一种形式美感与内容美感的深层次结合。,3.这首诗给人的感觉很美。你认为它美在哪里?请作出简要赏析。,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元
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27、成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,结构梳理,你是人间的四月天,四月天、笑,轻灵光艳,云烟、黄昏、星子、细雨,柔美恬静,轻、月圆,鲜妍庄严,鹅黄、绿、白莲,新鲜柔嫩,花开、燕、四月天,希望生机,爱与希望 新生的喜悦,主旨归纳,这首抒情诗中,诗人使用了描写和抒情的表达方式,极力抒写“你”是“人间的四月天”,表达了心中对儿子的希望和儿子出生给作者带来的喜悦。,拓展延伸,断续的曲子,最美或最温柔的 夜,带着一天的星。 记忆的梗上,谁不有 两三朵娉婷,披着情绪的花
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