1、,Unit 22 Environmental Protection,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,典例展示,WritingA report,PART 3,写作训练,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,调查报告是就一个问题展开调查后做出的分析与总结，是一种应用文。调查者在对特定对象深入考察了解的基础上，经过归纳整理，分析研究，进而揭示事物的本质，得出符合实际的结论，用文字形式表现出来。写此类报告时要注意知识的科学性，行文的条理性和语言的准确性。 调查报告的基本结构是： 1.标题：一般分为话题和报告日期； 2.报告的目的； 3.陈述：包括负面陈述和正面陈述； 4.结论和建议。,
2、写作指导,1.The aim of this report is to. 2.There are several disappointing facts and figures. 3.There are also problems caused by. 4.On the other hand，there are some encouraging things. 5.For example，the Chinese government has recently decided to. 6.They have introduced things such as. 7.As a result of
3、this，people now expect. 8.What this means is that people now expect. 9.To sum up，the situation is. 10.All things considered，there seems to be.,常用表达,PART 2,典例展示,经典示例 感悟体会佳作,最近，某机构针对2 384名青少年使用手机上网的情况进行了一次调查。结果如下：,请你根据以上的素材，为某英语报纸写一篇稿件，陈述这项调查的结果，并对这个现象进行简短的评论。 注意：词数100左右。,写作要求,A survey conducted recen
4、tly shows that 59% of the 2,384 teenagers glance through unhealthy information on the Internet now and then.67.3% of them admit they rely on their mobile phones and the Internet so much that they couldnt live without them.Whats more,90.9% say they are using or have used social networking software. E
5、very coin has two sides.Surfing the Internet brings advantages and disadvantages.I think its important that the government should take measures to make sure the Internet is safe for teenagers.Besides，parents should limit the time that their children spend playing with mobile phones or surfing the In
6、ternet.Only in this way can teenagers focus their attention on their lessons.,佳作欣赏,PART 3,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,随着哥本哈根(Copenhagen)世界气候大会的召开，越来越多的人开始关注气候变化。请写一篇100词左右的英文报告，简要描述过量排放二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)的危害(严重的风暴、干旱、全球变暖)，并提出具体建议，号召人们选择低碳生活(low-carbon life)。,审题 写作要求是写一篇调查报告。写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意应
7、用文的常规格式。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是写调查报告，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。 谋篇 第一段：介绍调查的发现； 第二段：提出建议； 第三段：发表自己的看法。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.上升，提高 _ 2.结果；导致 _ 3.聚焦于，专注于 _ 4.关掉(开关、灯等) _ 5.起作用；使不同 _,遣词造句,查看答案,go up,result in/lead to,focus on/concentrate on,turn off,make a difference,关键句式 1.空气中的二氧化碳含量快速增加。 The levels of carbon diox
8、ide in the air increase rapidly. 2.全球温度持续上升。 The global temperature continues going up. 3.联合国在哥本哈根召开的会议集中讨论了人们对气候变化的未来行动。 The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future action on climate changes. 4.这就吸引了越来越多的人的关注。 It has attracted more and more peoples attention.,句式升级 1.请把句1和句2按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)
9、The levels of carbon dioxide in the air increase rapidly，_ .(so连接并列句) (2) ，the global temperature continues going up.(with复合结构),查看答案,temperature continues going up,With the levels of carbon dioxide in the air increasing rapidly,so the global,2.请把句3和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。 (1)The UN conference in Copenhage
10、n focused on future action on climate changes， .(定语从句) (2)The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future action on climate changes， .(非谓语动词作状语),查看答案,which has attracted more and more peoples attention,attracting/having attracted more and more peoples attention,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右
11、的英语短文。,组句成篇,查看答案,With the levels of carbon dioxide in the air increasing rapidly，the global temperature continues going up.The rise of temperature will result in a higher sea level and more severe storms，floods and droughts. The UN conference in Copenhagen focused on future action on climate changes
12、，which has attracted more and more peoples attention.It is realized that leading a low-carbon life is necessary.For example，turn off the lights，the TV，the computers and so on if were not using them. In a word，individuals can make a difference.If all of us think about the problems and lead an environmentally friendly life，we will have a better and cleaner planet in the future.,参考范文,
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