1、 【话题分析】来源:学&科&网 能描述人们去上班或学生去上学所用的交通方式，内容包含出行方式、距离、所花的时间、感受及对 未来出行方式的憧憬。 1. 能用take/walk/ride/drive/by描述使用的交通工具； 2. 能用数字的英语形式描述时间或距离； 3. 写作微技能：能用 WH-questions 拓展写作内容。 【参考词汇和句式】 1. The bus stop is near my ho use, so I get to the library by bus. 公交站离我家很近，因此我去坐公交车去图书馆。 2. They live very far away from the
2、ir workplace, so they take the subway. 他们住得离他们工作的地方很远，因此他们乘地铁（去上班） 。 3. Mike likes walking and he thinks going to school on foot is good exercise. 迈克喜欢步行，他认为步行去上学是很好的锻炼。 4. Mr. Su has a bike and he ride the bike to work every day. 苏先生有一辆自行车，他每日都骑自行车上班。 5. Taking the plane from Wenzhou to Beijing is
3、very expensive. Most people like going to Beijing by train. 从温州到北京乘飞机很贵。大部分人喜欢乘火车去北京。 6. Its not easy for the villagers to go on the ropeway to cross the river to the outside world. 村民们通过索道横穿过河去外面的世界不是很容易。 7. Susan always leaves home very early so shes never late for school. 苏珊总是很早就离开家，因此她上学从未迟到过。 8
4、. Alice usually comes to school by school bus but sometimes she comes in her mothers car. 爱丽丝通常坐校车去上学，但是有时她也会坐妈妈的车去。来源:学科网 ZXXK 【典例】 假如你是 Frank，是一名中学生。你爸爸是一名医生(doctor)，你妈妈在广播电台工作。根据下面表格中 的内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你们一家人上学及上班的情况。 要求：1. 必须包括表格内的所有信息，可适当发挥。 2. 词数：80 左右。 Who Frank Father Mother Where School Hospita
5、l Radio station How By bike By car By bus How long 15 minutes 30 minutes 20 minutes _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【佳作展示】 Hi, Im Frank. Im a middle school student. I dont live far from my school. I usually ride my bike to school and it takes 15 minutes. My father is a doctor. The hospital is far from my home and it
6、takes my father half an hour to drive there. My mother works at a radio station. She usually goes there by bus and the bus ride takes twenty minutes. What about you and your family? 【名师点评】 本文运用三步法写作。以人物为主线，分别介绍了一家三口(Frank, father, mother)的身份、上学(班) 目的地、交通方式及花费时间等内容。 本文的添彩点： 交通方式的表达形式多样，避免形式的单一。 该句型形式
7、巧妙，增添了文章的文采。 I. 语言积累。语言积累。 （1）选择适当的单词完成句子。 meter，kilometer，minute，hour 1. It usually takes five _ to get to Hangzhou by bus from Wenzhou. 2. My home is not far from the school. The bike ride takes me about twenty _ to get to school. 3. There are about six hundred _ from Wenzhou to Nanjing.来源:Zxxk.Co
8、m 4. I live near to school. Its only about 800 _ from my home to school. （2）用 because，how，how far，how long，take，leave，get，walk 等词，完成下面小片段，每空词数不限。 Thanks for your last e-mail. You want to know 1. _ I go to school. Let me tell you. I usually 2. _ home at 6 oclock and 3. _ to the subway station. It 4.
9、_ about 10 minutes. Then I 5. _ the subway to my school. 6. _ does it take me to get to school by subway？First，let me tell you 7. _my school is. It is about 10 k ilometers from my house. So it usually 8. _ me about 30 minutes 9. _ to school. Taking the subway is never boring 10. _ I can listen to mu
10、sic on the way. And it is fast. II. 以读促写。以读促写。 请根据所给中文与首字母，完成下面短文。 Liangliang, one 11-_(岁)-old boy, _(居住)in a small village in China. For him and other students in the village, its difficult to get to school. There is a big river b_ the school and the village. There is no b_ and the river runs too q
11、uickly for _(船). So Liangliang needs to go on a rope to _(穿 过)the river to school _(每天). It usually takes him twenty minutes on the rope. Its not easy but he is not _(害怕)because he loves to play with his classmates and his teacher. _(许多)of the students and _(村民)never _(离开)the village. Its their drea
12、m to have a bridge. I hope their dream can _(实现)one day. III. 篇章训练。篇章训练。 （一）（一） 假设你是 Mike，你班为了了解同学们上学的交通方式，要求学生三人一组进行小组调查。请补充表格 并根据表格信息，写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文。 Name How to go to school Mike walk Tony ride a bike Nancy her mother drives her _ _ _ _ _ _ （二）（二） 假设你是赵晖，王伟是你的好朋友，你们在同一所学校上学。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文， 介绍你
13、们各自的到校方式。 要求：60 词左右。 Who How How far How long Zhao Hui by bike 4km 20 minutes Wang Wei by bus 10km 40 minutes _ _ _ _ _ _ _ （三）（三） 假设你是王莉，居住在北京。你的澳大利亚朋友 Vera 即将作为交换生来你校学习，她来信向你询问你 上学的交通方式并请你给出建议。请你给她写一封回信。要求：不少于 50 词。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I. 语言积累。语言积累。 （1）选择适当的单词完成句子。 1. hours 2. minutes 3. kilometers 4. m
14、eters （2）用 because，how，how far，how long，take，leave，get，walk 等词，完成下面小片段，每空词数不 限。 1. how 2. leave 3. walk 4. takes 5. take 6. How long 7. how far 8. takes 9. to get 10.because II. 以读促写。以读促写。 year； lives； between； bridge； boats； cross； every day； afraid； M any； villagers； leave； come true III.书面表达。书面表达
15、。来源来源:学科网学科网 ZXXK （一）（一） Im Mike and I want to tell you how I and my classmates get to school. I live in a small town. Its only about 1 kilometer from my home to school. So I walk to school every day. I like walking and I think its good exercise. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school. Fo
16、r me, I really enjoy my trip to school. Its never boring because I am always with many friends. As for my deskmate, Tony, he comes to school on his bike. He lives about 3 kilometers from home to school and he says riding brings him a lot of fun. And the bike ride needs about twenty minutes. However,
17、 he sometimes takes the bus when it is rainy. For Nancy, its not easy for her to get to school because she lives far away from our school. So her mother always drives her to school every morning. It usually takes them half an hour to get to school. I think its really tiring. （二）（二） Hey, Im Zhao Hui.
18、Wang Wei is my good friend. Were in the same school. My home is about four kilometers about forty minutes. 【名师点评】 这是一篇以表格提供信息的作文。首先要认识到表格中赵辉是“你”，另一个是你的朋友。在写作中人称 要把握好。表格中介绍的要点非常明确。主要介绍到校方式，离校距离，花费时间。在写作时可以适当的 调整内容的先后顺序，使短文通顺，合情理。根据内容短文主要用一般现在时，注意谓语动词第三人称单 数形式的运用。 （三）（三） Dear Vera, Im so glad to get y
19、our letter. Let me tell you something about how to go to school. My house is 4 kilometers away from my school. Every morning I walk to the bus stop first, and then take the No. 16 bus to school. The bus ride takes me 15 minutes. If you study in Beijing, its easy to ride a bike or take a bus to schoo
20、l. If you dont know the way to school, you can ask me. I hope you will enjoy your stay in Beijing. Please write to me soon. Yours, Wang Li 【名师点评】 这篇作文要求我们以王莉的身份，给自己澳大利亚的朋友 Vera 写信，告诉他自己的上学方式。关于上 学的方式这一话题是七年级下册 Unit 3 主要讨论的，因此对于这里所需要用到的单词、短语和句型，学生 们会非常熟悉。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称来叙述。写作的难点在于汉语表 达和英语上的
21、不同，例如英语句子中的语序，时间状语、方式状语等都位于句末，不能像汉语意思那样直 接翻译。还需要注意区分动词短语和介词短语。另外，为使表达流畅，还应使用一些连词，增强句子之间 的连贯性。来源:学&科&网 Z&X&X&K 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文的作者根据题目的要求，介绍了自己上学的方式。整篇短文内容完整、丰 富，使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法准确，在需要用第三人称单数的地方都用 了单数形式， 这是一个难点。 另外短文中还使用了一些较好的句型， 如 My house is 4 kilometers away from my school 中的 away from.， The bus ride takes me 15 minutes 中 take 的形式变化、 If you study in Beijing， its easy to ride a bike or take a bus to school 中 if 引导条件状语从句等等。
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