2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略34：乐观

1、34 34 乐观乐观 20212021 年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 相关话题解读相关话题解读 人难免会遇到挫折和困难，这时候，我们应该积极面对，迎难而上，勇于克服困难，接受挑战。耐挫， 也就是用乐观的心态，积极面对困难的种生活态度。 此话题的写作，可以是一篇记叙文， 比如记叙一次具体的挫折或遇到的困难， 并描述自己是如何克 服的;也可以是一篇说明文， 比如闲述如何应对生活中的难题， 或是介绍积极面对困难的-一个好办法等。 无论什么体裁，涉及这一话题的写作， 关键是要体现出积极乐观的态度。 相关话题写作示例指导相关话题写作示例指导 实

2、践案例实践案例 题目题目 Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写篇短文， 字数不得 少于 60 个词。 Jason, a Junior Three student, wrote to Angela, the editor of the newspaperTeenagers Life, complaining that his parents never allow him to surf the Internet even when he wants to find

3、some information for study. As a result, he often has a quarrel with his parents .Jason is upset and asks Angela for advice about what he should do”deal with the problem Suppose you are Angela, please write back to him and help him out o trouble 审题审题 根据题目要求，写作的内容是封回信。 通过审题，可以明确所给的写作情境: Jason 父母不让他上网

4、， Jason 为此经常和父母沙果。Jason 向 Angela 求助，希望 Angela 能帮助他解决这一问题。 那么，我们的回信应该包含以下两部分内容: 1.分析 Jason 父母不让他上网的原因或目的，让 Jason 明白父母行为背后的动机; 2.帮 Jason 想出应对该问题的方法，并具体说明该方法能取得的效果，或者说明为什么采取这一方法， 鼓励他要积极面对，努力解决。 段落结构段落结构 本文可采用“总一分总”的写作结构: 第一段:点明问题，亮出看法。 第二段:(1)分析父母不许 Jason 上网的原因 (2)提供应对问题的方法，并做具体说明。 第三段:概括总结以上内容。 核心语汇核心

5、语汇 be worried about sth.为.感到担忧 deal with sth.应对、处理某事 be in trouble 处于困境中 calm down 冷静下来 Find a way to do sth.找到做某事的方法 face the challenge bravely 勇敢面对挑战 solve the problem in a wise way 聪明地解决问题 have a positive attitude towards sth.对某事持积极的态度 参考句型参考句型 Thanks for your letter and I am now replying to you

6、and tllig you my opinion.感谢你的来信，现在我给你回 信，并说说我的看法。 I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 我期待着能够尽快收到你的回信。 I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 我希望这些建议对你有帮助。 Theres no need to do sth. 做某事是没有必要的。 It is a waste of time 1 energy to do sth. 做某事是浪费时间/精力的。 Life is full of changes and chal

7、lenges. 生活总是充满着变化和挑战。 习作习作 1 A letter to Jason Dear Jason, I have heard from you. I know you want to surf the Internet but your parents dont allow you to do that.You should know that your parents do this only for your own good. They think online games are very attractive. We may easily be attracted.

8、 Study harder to prove that surfing the Internet isnt that harmful to your studies as long as you make progress. Tell them you wont surf the Internet for too long so that they may agree to let you surf it. What you should do is to calm down, and talk about it with them politely. Good luck! Yours sin

9、cerely, Angela 点评点评: 题目中所要求的写作内容，都在习作中有所呈现，是-篇内容完整、结构明了的习作。有些句子的表述 有待改进，比如“your parents do . for your own good . We may easily be attracted 可以改成:However, you should know your parents are trying to protect you, because sometimes we may easily be attracted by online games这样既显得句式多样，也使得语言更为简洁。 习作习作 2 A

10、letter to Jason Dear Jason, I have read your letter. There is no need to quarrel with your parents because it doesnt help but will make the matter worse. They dont let you surf the Internet because there is something bad for you on the Internet. I know that it is convenient and it helps to find the

11、information for your studies on the Internet, so you need it. Try to talk with your parents.Limiting the time you spend on the Internet may be a good way, which helps your parents realize what you want is just a short time rest. You can also allow your parents to sit beside you when you use the Inte

12、rnet so that they may believe you next time. I believe you can handle this problem with your parents well. Yours sincerely, Angela 点评点评 这篇习作能按照题目要求精心构思，客观地分析了父母不让 Jason 上网的原因，并站在 Jason 的角度， 给他提出了切实可行的建议，语气客观委貌。本文结构清晰，行文连费活言优美，感情真挚，是篇出色的 应用文。此外， 文中使用了不少好间好句。 比如 there is no need to quarrel with your p

13、arents . Limiting the time . may be a god way 等，值得大家借鉴。 相关话题满分作文必背相关话题满分作文必背 （一）（一） 题目题目 Write at least 60 words about the topic Face life with a smile. (以“笑对人生” (微笑着面对生活)为题， 写- 篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following points must be included. (必须包含下列要点。必须包含下列要点。) 1.

14、 How do you usually face life? / Do you usually face the life with a smile?2. Especially when should you smile to face life? (Give at least two examples)3. Why? 满分优秀满分优秀范文范文 Face life with a smile Its said that life is like a mirror. When you smile to it, it smiles to you, When you cry to it, it als

15、o cries to you. Therefore, I choose to face life with a smile! I smile especially when Im faced with something difficult. I think I should be confident enough to overcome it instead of giving up easily. So, I always choose to smile in order to cheer myself up. The more optimistic I am, the easier th

16、e life will be. I also choose to smile when I am sick, because smiling is a way to comfort myself. It is the smile that reduces the pain I am suffering. Thats why I choose to face life with a smile. Use your smile to change the world. Dont let the world change your smile. （二）（二） 题目题目 Write a passage

17、 of at lest 60 words on the topic Les learn to smile. (以“让我们学会微笑”为题，写一篇 不少于 60 个词的短文， Suggested points: 1. Do you often smile in your daily life? 2. Why should we learn to smile? (Give one or two examples) 3. What changes will we see if we smile more often? 满分优秀范文满分优秀范文 Lets learn to smile I formed

18、the habit of smiling all the time in my childhood. A big smile on my face can break the ice, let my friends feel warm and make us closer to each other. Besides, smiling can bring people support and confidence. Whenever I feel frustrated by the difficulties I meet, a bright smile from others will soo

19、n comfort me and bring me to peace. And I often smile to myself, as I want to encourage myself to work hard and achieve more. Therefore,more smiles will not only make other people comfortable, but also make myself feel better. （三）（三） 题目题目 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic When I met

20、a difficulty. (以“当我遇到困难时”为题， 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Questions for reference: 1. What kind of difficulty did you meet once? Give one example. 2. How did you face and overcome it? 3. How did you feel after you overcame it? 满分优秀范文满分优秀范文 When I met a difficulty As we all know, life is full of difficu

21、lties and we must be brave and confident to face the challenges and overcome the difficulties. When I was six years old, I decided to learn how to ride a bike. At first, I thought it was easy for me to learn it. But when I was on the bike, I couldnt keep balance and fell down again and again. I was

22、really frustrated and upset at that moment. But then, I thought if I gave up, I would never be able to ride a bike. Instead, if I tried again, it would be possible for me to succeed. I got up from the ground quickly, and told myself that I could do it with a smile. It made me more confident. Finally, I made it! I was so happy and felt proud of myself. From then on, I realized that as long as we face difficulties bravely, we can make a difference.