1、 Unit2 How often do you exercise? 总分总法总分总法写关于调查报告类的作文写关于调查报告类的作文 话题分析话题分析 本单元的话题是课余活动，围绕这一话题谈论从事某一活动的频率。在写作方面，要求写一篇有 关日常活动的调查报告。写作时，开篇要点题，即点出调查报告的主体和对象；其次，要对调查报告的内 容展开分述，要正确使用频度副词（如 always，usually，often，sometimes，hardly ever，never 等）及次数 （如 once，twice，three times 等）的表达；结尾要进行综述以表达中心观点。 写作步骤写作步骤 总：整体介绍
2、所要进行的调查； 分：逐条介绍相应内容； 总：总结并整体评价。 假如你是三班的学生李丽。 你就班级里的学生看电视、 做运动、 做家庭作业进行了调查。 其结果如下： Activity Every Day Twice a Week Four Times a Week Watch TV 60% 20% 20% Have Sports 10% 20% 70% Do Homework 100% 0% 0% 要求：根据表格内容，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【佳作展示】【佳作展示】 I made a survey about the students activities i
3、n Class 3 last week. Here are the results. Most students watch TV every day. Some students watch TV twice a week. Some students watch TV four times a week. The results of sports are interesting. Some students have sports every day. Some students have sports twice a week. Most students have sports fo
4、ur times a week. And all the students do homework every day. No students do homework twice or four times a week. I think we should spend less time watching TV. 【名师点评】【名师点评】 本文运用总分总法写调查报告类作文。第一段总写调查的内容、对象等。第二段分写调查的结果。最后 对调查结果发表个人意见。本文结构紧凑，思路清晰，能适当运用本单元所学的内容。 本文的添彩点： twice a week，four times a week，twi
5、ce or four times a week 等短语的熟练运用。 The results of sports are interesting. 使上下句语意更加连贯。 （一）（一） 根据表格，写一篇关于学生日常生活习惯的调查报告。 （不少于 80 词） Activities How many students How often Exercise all an hour every day Eat fruit and drink milk 90% every day Eat junk food 7% Two or three times a week Drink coffee no Slee
6、p most Eight or nine hours every night Here are the results of the students activity survey in our class. All students exercise _ _ _ _ _ _ _ （二二） 在八年级上学期即将结束之际，八(1)班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈这一学期自己的收获与 变化。请为 David 准备一份 80 词左右的演讲稿，具体内容如下： 过去过去 现在现在 学习 很少阅读，花时间在 读书使我放松 环保 浪费水电，随处乱抛垃圾 意识到环保的重要性，垃圾入桶 礼仪 大声喧哗，插队
7、推挤 举止礼貌，主动让座 爱心 不知道如何关心他人 展望未来 相信自己在将来会越来越棒。 Hello, everyone. Im David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. _ _ _ _ _ _ Thanks for listening! （三三） 根据下面的信息，写一篇短文描述 Tom 日常生活中的好习惯和坏习惯。 内容要点：1. 锻炼(every day ) 2. read
8、 books (每天) 3. 吃水果和蔬菜(four or six times a week ) 4. eat junk food ( every day) 5. stay up late (经常) 6. sleep (less than eight hours every day) 7. 使用英特网 (over two hours a day) 8. go to the dentist (never) 9. help with housework (hardly ever) 要求：1. 必须包含以下所有信息； 2. 词数不少于 60； 3. 字迹清楚，认真。 _ _ _ _ _ _ （一）（
9、一） 【思路导航】【思路导航】 在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括五方面的内容。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的 衔接，使语意连贯，表达流畅。 【佳作展示佳作展示】 Here are the results of the students activity survey in our class. All students exercise an hour every day. Its good for health. Most students eat fruit and drink milk every day. Its a good habit. Most students sl
10、eep eight or nine hours every night. Thats right. Some students eat junk food two or three times a week. Its bad for our health. No student drink coffee. Its OK. 【名师点评名师点评】 作者从提纲的五个方面讲述了学生们的大概情况。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。 文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如：Most students sleep eight or nine hours every night. Thats right.
11、 Some students eat junk food two or three times a week 等。 （二二） 【思路导航】【思路导航】 【佳作展示佳作展示】 Hello, everyone. Im David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last term, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most o
12、f my time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I w
13、ashed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins. Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now, I can beha
14、ve politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope. Im sure I will do better and better in Grade 9. Thanks for listening! 【名师点评名师点评】 本文行文流畅，语言规范。各
15、种短语句型表达的使用非常准确，固定短语used to do，open up a whole new world to me，realized the importance of protecting the environment，cared little about以及复合句Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. Now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to
16、someone in need on the bus.的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章 增色不少。 （三三） 【思路导航】【思路导航】 【佳作展示佳作展示】 Tom is a middle student now. He exercises every day. It is good for his health. He also reads books every day. He likes reading very much. He eats fruits and vegetables four or six times a week. But he has bad habits. He
17、eats junk food every day. He often stays up late. So he sleeps less than eight hours every day. He hardly ever does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day. He never goes to the dentist. It is bad for his health. 【名师点评名师点评】 这篇作文结构清晰完整， 表达准确流利， 要点齐全。 文中有一些好的表达方式如 But he has bad habits. He hardly does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day.等。
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