1、专题专题 12 作文作文 1（2020 届安徽省合肥市高三第二次质检）假定你是李华，正在英国一所国际学校交流学习，该校的校报 SUNSHINE 正在征集读者意见，请你给该校报编辑写封信，内容包括： 1. 简要评价； 2. 最喜欢的栏目（如：Stories Behind Culture）并简述理由； 3. 建议增加中国文化的介绍。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ 【答案】Dear editor, Im so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper SUNSHINE set
2、up by your school. I think SUNSHINE has many advantages. Its rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization and its a guide to English learning. My favorite column is Stories Behind Culture. For one thing, I like to read stories with different cultural backgrounds, which can expand my cultura
3、l horizons. So it can help me better experience the local culture when I travel abroad. For another, through it I Ive improved my English reading skills. If only you could introduce something more about Chinese traditional culture in the culture column. Here I really hope SUNSHINE will attract more
4、readers. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达是一封书信。假定你是李华，正在英国一所国际学校交流学习，该校的校报 SUNSHINE 正在征集读者意见，请你给该校报编辑写封信进行反馈。 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 简要评价；2. 最喜欢的栏目（如：Stories Behind Culture）并简述理由；3. 建议增加中国文化的介绍。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作
5、要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper，many advantages，be rich in content，range from economy to civilization，a guide to English learning，My favorite column is Stories Behind Culture.，read stories with different cultural backgrounds，expand my cultural horizons，
6、help me better experience the local culture，travel abroad，improve my English reading skills. If only you could introduce something more about Chinese traditional culture in the culture column. 可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all
7、。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not onlybut (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 2（2020 届安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次质检） 假定你是李华，一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示欢迎； 2.提供一些校园生活的建议。 注意：1.词数 100 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear friends， _ Yours s
8、incerely Li Hua 【答案】Dear friends， I m very glad to learn that you re coming to study in our school. On behalf of the Students Union， I d like to express our warmest welcome to you. In order to make your life here comfortable and convenient， I d like to present you some instructions. Firstly， the wea
9、ther here may be different from that in your country， so please be sure to bring proper clothes. Besides， you should be acquainted with some daily expressions and cultures in Chi-na in advance so that you can communicate with the teachers and native students well. It s my sincere hope that you would
10、 enjoy yourselves and acquire a great deal of knowledge in our school. And I m looking forward to your arrival. Yours sincerely Li Hua 【解析】本文为应用文。一批国际学生将要到你校交流学习。请你以学校学生会名义写封邮件，内容包括：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。 本文为书信体作文。书信体作文一般包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写邮件的原因。第二部分叙述主要内容。主要包括两点：表示欢迎；提供一些校园生活的建议。最后一部分表达自己期待对方的回复。写作时要注意运用一些较高
11、级的词汇，句式要灵活多样，如果有需要，可适当增加细节。文章最好运用一些顺序连词，以使文章行文要连贯。 3 （2020 届福建省福州市高三毕业班质量检测） 假定你是李华， 作为交换生在国际学院英语学校学习。你不慎把包遗落在校图书馆里，包里有一本唐诗三百首。你看到了失物招领（下图）后，请你就预约取回时间、询问义工事宜等向 Mr. Brown 写封邮件。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Found A small black bag was found with a book in it this Friday aft
12、ernoon. I dont know anything else about its owner. Shall the owner contact Mr. Brown, the librarian, by e-mail? E-mail: Mr. Brown _ 【答案】Dear Mr. Brown, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student on an exchange program, and Im studying at Academy International School of English. Im writing to extend to you my sinc
13、ere gratitude for finding my bag, which I carelessly left at the library on Friday afternoon. In the bag is a collection of 300 famous poems from the Chinese Tang Dynasty. I can never thank you enough. This book means a lot to me as it was a gift from my mom. Could you please tell me when and how I
14、can find you and get my bag back? By the way, are volunteers needed at your library? Id like to help in return for your kindness. Im looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给图书管理员 Mr. Brown，询问何时何地能拿回自己丢失的物品并询问有关义工的事情。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 人称：第一人称为主
15、结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1. 表示感谢； 2. 询问何时何地取回物品； 3. 询问有关义工的事情。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） Im writing to do；a collection of；get sth. back；in return for 第三步：连词成句 1. Im writing to extend to you my sincere gratitude for finding my bag. 2. In the bag is a collection of 300 famous poems from the C
16、hinese Tang Dynasty. 3. Could you please tell me when and how I can find you and get my bag back? 4. Id like to help in return for your kindness. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not l
17、east 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also 3.表转折对比关系： However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So
18、, Thus, Therefore, As a result 5 表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say, 6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking 8.表选择：eitheror，or 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 4（2020 届福建省厦门市高三一次质检） 假定你是李华，你们学校将邀请平安医院康教授开设讲座。你校英国交换生 Pete 想了解讲座的有关事宜。
19、请根据下表内容写一封邮件告知他具体情况。 时间与地点 下周六下午三点 http:/ 主题与活动形式 COVID-19 预防 在线收看、留言互动 听讲座前的准备 注册、备好问题 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ 【答案】Dear Peter, Learning that youre interested in the lecture on COVID-19 prevention, I am writing to give further information about it. Professor Kang from Pingan Hospital
20、is invited to deliver the lecture, scheduled at 3 next Saturday afternoon. Due to the influence of pandemic, we are supposed to attend the lecture via the link http:/ where we can also interact with the professor using the message board. Think about the questions you would like to ask and do remembe
21、r to sign up before the live-streamed lecture. If there is still anything you would like to know, just let me know. Yours truly, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 第 1 步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你们学校将邀请平安医院康教授开设讲座。你校英国交换生 Pete 想了解讲座的有关事宜。请根据下表内容写一封邮件告知他具体情况，包括讲座的时间和地点、主题与活动形式以及所需做的准备等。时态应为一般将来时。 第 2 步：
22、根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； COVID-19 prevention（新冠病毒防护），lecture（讲座），pandemic（疫情），live-streamed（现场直播的），attend（出席），influence（影响）及 deliver（发表、做讲座）等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 5（2020 届广东省高考模拟 ） 假定你是李华， 曾在你校工作的外教 Peter 得知你们最近搬迁到新校区学习， 来信询问新校区的情况，请你给
23、他回封邮件，内容包括： 1. 介绍新校区（地理位置，建筑布局，设施设备等）； 2. 邀请他闲时来访。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _ 【答案】Dear Peter, I am really glad to hear from you. Things have changed quite a lot since you were last at our school. The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more abo
24、ut. The new campus is more conveniently situated, within walking distance of the city center. On campus, with the modern teaching block standing in the middle, surrounded by other functional areas like the library, the gym and the stadium, etc. Above all, equipped with a computer and a smart screen,
25、 the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atmosphere for our daily study. Do remember to drop by when you have time! Our new campus is well worth a visit. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。 第 1 步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，曾在你校工作的外教 Peter 得知你们最近搬迁到新校区学习， 来信询问新校区的情况，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍新校区（地理位置，建筑布局，设施设备等）
26、；2. 邀请他闲时来访。 第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear from (收到来信)；campus (校园)；in the middle (在中间)；equipped with(装备有)；atmosphere (氛围)等。 第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。 第 4 步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 6（2020 届广东省广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试） 假定你是李华。你的英国笔友 Tom 需要完成一个关于“中国龙文化”的课前小演讲，他
27、来信向你咨询。请你给他回信，内容包括： 1. 龙的象征意义； 2. 相关节庆活动； 3. 相关成语或习语。 参考词汇：the descendants of the dragon 龙的传人 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信的开头和结尾己给出，不计入词数。 _ 【答案】Dear Tom, Thanks for your interesting question about the role of dragons in Chinese culture. I did a little research and here are some facts t
28、hat may be helpful. Historically, legend says that Chinese are descendants of dragons, which symbolize good luck and highest power. As a result, only the emperor could wear garments featuring dragon designs in ancient China. Ordinary people shared the dragons blessings through celebrations, such as
29、the Duanwu Festivals dragon boat races and dragon dances performed during Chinese New Year. Dragons have also entered our daily vocabulary. I wish you the spirit and vigor of a dragon is one common idiom used to convey wishes for good health. I hope this information is useful for your presentation.
30、If you have further questions, feel free to ask. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给 Tom 写一封信，向他介绍关于“中国龙文化”的信息，以帮助他完成相关的一个演讲。 文章应分为四部分。第一部分直接开门见山，点明写信的目的。可以使用“Im writing to”，定语从句等句式。第二部分要介绍龙的象征意义，可以使用 symbolize，宾语从句等词汇或句式。第三部分要介绍和龙有关的节庆活动，例如端午节等节日。第四部分要介绍一些和龙有关的成语或习语，例如：龙飞凤舞，龙虎精神等。 6.（2020 届广东省深圳市高三第一
31、次调研 ） 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Jack 打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关 信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.表示欢迎； 2.推荐内容； 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, Knowing that you are coming to China for the summer vacation, I am more than excited to say “Warm welcome” and cant wait to meet you at
32、 the airport with my open arms! To make your trip more worthwhile, Id like to make some recommendations. To begin with, I suggest you start your holiday in Beijing, a top priority for any traveller to China because you can fully experience the charm of Chinese history and civilization there. Besides
33、, the high speed train, which is fast, safe and comfortable, is a transportation means you cant miss. When doing shopping, you are recommended to use mobile payments like Wechat Pay or Ali Pay due to the great convenience they offer. Hopefully, you will find your trip rewarding and have a great time
34、 in China! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达是一封书信。 假定你是李华， 你的外国笔友 Jack 打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，介绍相关信息。 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.表示欢迎；2.推荐内容；3.你的祝愿。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：the summer vacation，more t
35、han excited， cant wait to meet you， make some recommendations， start your holiday in Beijing， a top priority for any traveller to China，fully experience the charm of Chinese history and civilization， the high speed train，transportation means ，use mobile payments， due to the great convenience， find y
36、our trip rewarding， have a great time。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not onlybut (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 7（2020 届河南省安阳市高三第二
37、次模拟）假定你是李华，你的美国网友 Jack 写信询问你为什么喜欢在闲暇时间读书。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 你的读书经历； 2. 你从读书中获得的益处。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time. _ Write to tell me what you u
38、sually do in your spare time. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, Everyone has different ways of spending his or her free time. As for me, I usually do reading when I have free time. When I was young, my parents bought me a lot of books. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow
39、 White, and so on. Ever since then, reading has become an important part of my life. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living. I got to know about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other peoples stories through thei
40、r biographies. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax. Write to tell me what you usually do in your spare time. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，对美国网友 Jack 提出的关于读书的问题作出回答，包括读书经历和读书的益处。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构：总分法
41、 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1.读书经历描述（When I was young; Three Little Pigs, Snow White） 2.读书益处描述 1）带来乐趣和缓解压力（gives me a lot of fun; releases me from the pressures of modern living） 2）了解世界（know about other countries and their cultures and customs） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） make friends with; give sb.
42、a lot fun; release sb. from; know about; as well as; in short; not onlybut also 第三步：连词成句 1. Through reading, I have made friends with the Three Little Pigs, Snow White, and so on. 2. Reading enriches my life, gives me a lot of fun, and releases me from the pressures of modern living. 3. I got to kno
43、w about other countries and their cultures and customs, as well as other peoples stories through their biographies. 4. In short, not only can reading broaden my horizons and make me happy, but also reading helps me relax. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表并列补充关系： what is more; besides;
44、 moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not onlybut (also); including, 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 8（2020 届河南省郑州市高三第二次质量预测）假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友 Bella 发电子邮件向你询问我国城市生活垃圾分类回收的情况,请根据以下要点用英语给她回复。 1.你对生活垃圾分类回收的理解； 2.你们城市生活垃圾分类回收的好做法； 3.你对实施生活垃圾分类回收的看法与建议。 参考词汇:生活垃圾 domestic garbage；
45、垃圾分类 garbage sorting；可回收利用的 recyclable 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Bella, _ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Bella, Learning from your e-mail that you want to know something about domestic garbage sorting in our country, Id like to share it with you. Garbage sorting is not onl
46、y beneficial to the environment, but can save lots of natural resources. In our city, measures have been taken. For example, various activities have been organized to stress the importance and therere dustbins with signs for recyclable, harmful, kitchen and other waste so that citizens can know clea
47、rly where to put the garbage. Since the measures are reasonable and favorable, we should stick to them. I hold the belief that our environment will be improved as long as we keep working together. Whats your idea about garbage sorting? Please write to me. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文， 要求考生写一封邮件， 向
48、朋友回复有关我国城市生活垃圾分类回收的情况。 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 要求：1.你对生活垃圾分类回收的理解； 2.你们城市生活垃圾分类回收的好做法； 3.你对实施生活垃圾分类回收的看法与建议。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） learn from; want to do; domestic; garbage sorting; share with; beneficial to; natural resources; take measures; various; stress; importance; dustbin; sign; recyclable;
49、 harmful; clearly; reasonable; favorable; stick to; hold the belief; improve; as long as; keep doing; ones idea about 第三步：连词成句 1.Learning from your e-mail that you want to know something about domestic garbage sorting in our country, Id like to share it with you. 2.Garbage sorting is not only beneficial to the environment, but can save lots of natural resources. 3.In our city, measures have been taken. 4.For example, various activities have been organized to stress the importance and therere dustbins with signs for recyclable, harmful, kitchen and other waste so that citizens can know clearly
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