1、写作训练 书面表达书面表达-志愿者话题志愿者话题 假如你是刘华，你所在的学校长在招募英语节（English Festival）的志愿者，请你给负责此项活动的Ms Chen 写一封信， 并表示对做好这项工作充满信心。 写作要点： 1. 表达迫不及待想要成为志愿者的心情。 2. 介绍个人信息： 1）班级，九年三班，班长 2）特长：擅长英语口语，善于与人相处。 3.针对此次英语节应该举行哪些活动提出至少两个建议。 作文解析： 背景信息 话题：1个人情况， 5学校生活 作文体裁 自荐信 人称：第一人称，我 时态：要点1表达想成为志愿者的心情：一般现在时 要点2为一般事实介绍，用一般现在时 要点3为即将
2、举行的活动提建议用一般现在时 作文语气：礼貌，诚恳，学生对老师的尊敬 写作要点1&2 切记单纯英汉互译，多按逻辑重组信息。 此文章要点1,2信息较少，所以添加时应该更注重逻辑添加，即把这几句话用关联词有机的结合成因果关系，或其他逻辑关系的句子，避免翻译句子。 得知我校正在招募英语节的志愿者，我迫不及待的申请要成为一名志愿者。我的优势如下/下面让我来做一下自我介绍：首先我是九年三班的班长，我擅长英语口语， 此外，我也善于与人相处。对于您来说给我这次重大意义的机会是您极好的选择。我对完成这项工作充满着信心。 写 作 要 点 3 开放点：人称 内容 我们（我也是中学生） 1. 提出举行哪些活动建议，
3、提出举行哪些活动建议， 参考点 1.举行英语演讲比赛 2.举行英语阅读竞赛 3.创建一个英语角 文章结尾 不是开放点结尾 1.信件最好有结尾，最好是人称开头。 2.表达决心，希望获准 写作训练 逐句消化： 1. 得知我校正在招募英语节的志愿者。 1) Learning that our school is in need of some volunteers for the coming English Festival. 2) Learning that our school is wanting volunteers for the coming English Festival. 3)
4、I hear that our school is calling for everyone to become a volunteer of the English Festival. 2.我迫不及待的申请要成为一名志愿者 1）I cant wait to become a volunteer. 2) I cant wait to apply(申请) to be a volunteer. 3) I can hardly wait to write to apply for the job/position. 4) I cant wait to be a member of volunteer
5、s. 3.我的优势如下/下面让我来做一下自我介绍 1）Now， Ill introduce myself to you. 2) The following are my advantages. 4.首先，我是九年三班的班长。 1) To begin with, Im a monitor and Im in Class 3, Grade 9。 2) At first,Im the monitor from Class 3, Grade 9. 3) To begin with, Im the monitor who is in Class 3, Grade 9. 5.我擅长英语口语， 此外，我也善
6、于与人相处。 1) I am good at spoken English and I can get on better with others because of my active and outgoing character. 2) I not only do well in spoken English but also can get on better with others because Im an active and outgoing person . 3) Not only am I good at spoken English but also I am exper
7、ienced in getting along better with others due to the fact that Im an active and outgoing person . 4) I am adept at spoken English, in addition, I can also get on better with others due to my active and outgoing character. 5) I am active and outgoing, thus making it easy for me to get along better w
8、ith others. 6.您能给我这次重要的机会真是太好了。 1)Its kind of you to give me this important chance. 得知我校正在招募英语节的志愿者，我迫不及待的申请要成为一名志愿者。我的优势如下：首先我是九年三班的班长，我擅长英语口语， 此外，我积极外向，我更善于与人相处。对于您来说给我这次重大意义的机会是您极好的选择。我对完成这项工作充满着信心。 写作训练 2)Its your kindness to offer me the significant opportunity. 7.我对完成这项工作充满着信心。 1）I have confid
9、ence in finishing the work. 2) Ill complete the work with great confidence. 3) Its me who am confident of complete the work. 4) I am confident that Im suitable for doing the job. 结尾句：1.At length Im greatly assured that I can finish this job successfully. 2.If I were chosen, I would make a contributi
10、on to being an excellent volunteer. 3. I am sure I will do it well if Im given the chance to be a member of the volunteers. 4.I will appreciate it if you could offer me the valuable chance. 5.Thank you for considering my application, and Im looking forward to meeting you. 范文1： Dear Ms Chen, How are
11、you doing? I hear that our school is calling for everyone to become a volunteer of English Festival I cant wait to be a member of them . Thus, I will introduce myself to you. I m the monitor who is in Class 3, Grade 9. Not only am I good at spoken English, but also I am experienced in getting on wel
12、l with others. Its kind (of)you to give me this significant opportunity. I promise to complete my work with great confidence. To make this festival more meaningful ,Im going to offer you two proper suggestions. For one thing, you can consider holding an English spelling contest. It obviously can enl
13、arge students vocabulary .For the other, an English reading contest can be held on that day. It can improve our spoken English in a short time. In addition, it can help us build up our confidence. So why not have such great activities that can benefit us a lot? If I were chosen, I would make an effo
14、rt to being an excellent volunteer. Thank you for considering my application, and Im looking forward to meeting you Yours, Liu Hua 写作训练 范文2： Dear Ms Chen, How are you doing? Ive heard that our school is recruiting volunteers for the English Festival. I cant wait to be a member of them., and I have c
15、onfidence in doing a good job as a volunteer . The following are my advantages. I am a monitor of Class 3, Grade9, For this reason, I am used to serving others in my daily life. Besides, I have many specialties. For example, I am good at speaking English, and I can also get along well with anyone. I
16、 think these will help me finish the work perfectly. Then, Id like to put forward some advice for this activity. As for me, the English Festival will be more meaningful with more useful units. First of all, we can hold a spelling competition. That will not only improve students hand -writing, but al
17、so enlarge our vocabulary. Furthermore, we can also set up an English corner, in which students can communicate i English. It will provide us a good chance to make more friends and practice our spoken English. All in all , I sincerely hope I can be chosen as a volunteer and I ll spare no effort to m
18、ake a contribution to the English Festival in order to help every student make great progress through the activity. 志愿者文章素材积累志愿者文章素材积累 一，成为志愿者应该具备的能力 1.性格：active 积极的 energetic 精力充沛的 outgoing 外向的 optimistic乐观的 brave 勇敢的 humorous 幽默的 helpful 有帮助的 2.英语活动的志愿者 1)我擅长英语，并且多次在英语竞赛中获奖。 I do well in English a
19、nd I have won several prizes in English contests . 2） 精通英语和中国文化，因此和外国人交流某有任何困难 I have such a good knowledge of English and Chinese culture that I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. 3) 我有良好的双语表达能力，使我能够很好的与来访者交流 I have a good command of(精通) Chinese and English, Which enables me to commu
20、nicate with visitors smoothly. 3.其他方面的志愿者 I show great interest in. and Ive learned. 写作训练 Eg: 我对民间艺术有极大的兴趣，而且我了解剪纸艺术。 I show great interest in folk art, and Ive learned about paper-cutting a lot. Thus,. 二，二，参加志愿者活动的好处参加志愿者活动的好处(看法看法) 1.成为志愿者能够提高我们的能力。当我们做志愿者活动时对于我们来说是有益处的 Being volunteers can improv
21、e our abilities. Its useful for us to make ourselves better when volunteering. 2.成为志愿者能够使我们交到更多的朋友。 Being volunteers can make us make more friends。 3.成为志愿者，我们能够和更多人分享快乐 Being volunteers , we can share our happiness with more people 4.成为志愿者可以开拓我们的视野,我也可能遇到各种事情及课外知识。 Being volunteers can broaden our v
22、iews. We may meet various things, which can bring us much knowledge we cant learn in school. 5.成为志愿者能为社会做许多贡献。我们的世界将会变得更加多姿多彩。 To be volunteers can make many contributions to the society, and our world will become more colorful. 6.通过帮助处于困境的人们我们能使我们自己变成热心的人。 We make ourselves become warm-hearted pers
23、ons through helping the persons in trouble. 三，三，如何做一名优秀的志愿者建议如何做一名优秀的志愿者建议 1.你最好搜索一些关于这个活动的信息和知识。 Youd better search for some information about this activity and some knowledge. 2. 你应该把你最好的行为举止展现给游客 You should show your best behavior to the visitors. 3.你应该对参观者的游客的每个人都有礼貌 You should be polite to ever
24、yone who visits here. 4.作为志愿者，一看到有人处于困境中应立即去帮忙。 As a volunteer, as soon as you see someone in trouble , you ought to help immediately. 5.你应该乐于帮助身边的每个人，以便于你能自己顺利地完成工作 You ought to be helpful to all who are around you to do your work by yourself smoothly. 5.为了你能更好的熟悉和完美的完成工作，你应该参加特定的训练。 you should joi
25、n in the certain training for volunteers so that you can become familiar with the work better and complete your task perfectly 写作训练 实践演练 （2018-松北二模） 假如你是李军，中考结束后，你想应聘英语暑假英语导游志愿者，为来哈尔滨游玩的外国人服务，请根据以下提示，给导游机构领导Peter 写一篇自荐信，并希望他能将机会给你。 写作要点： 1. 介绍自己个人情况（如：年龄，爱好等） 2. 简述自己的优势：英语优秀，善长与人沟通，了解哈尔滨的历史和文化 3. 谈谈
26、对志愿者工作的看法 (19-南岗三模) 假如你是北京的付强,下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹付梦要来北京2019年世园会( The Beijing EXPO2019)担任志愿者。请根据以下提示,给她写一封信,并告诉她如何在世园会做一名优秀的志愿者。 写作要点: 1.欢迎她来北京。 2.介绍北京世园会的情况 (1)办会主题:绿色生活,美丽家园( homeland) (2)举办时间:4月29日至10月7日 (3)展出的内容:可以看到超过1200种的植物等等 3.对她如何在世园会做一名优秀的志愿者提出具体建议。 写作要求 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适话当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 4.至少80词
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