1、 读后续写：环境描写读后续写：环境描写 借景抒情、寓情于景是写作中常用的手法。恰当的背景场景描写有利于推动故事情节的发展，烘托人物的心理活动，给读者身临其境的感受。背景场景描写要有全貌有细节，有全景有特写，要点面结合，重点突出。可以描写事件发生的时间、地点、环境等，也可以描写人看到的景象或感受到的某种情绪。 注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。 那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。 环境描写在读后续
2、写中的作用： 1.衬托或突出人物性格、心理等 2.暗示或推动故事情节发展 3.增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调 4.揭示主题，深化主旨 1.气氛氛围气氛氛围 A heavy and dead silence blanketed the room.（描写房间的寂静） A hush fell upon the class. （描写教室寂静） At the end of the day, night comes and the world is peaceful and calm.白天渐渐隐去，夜晚悄悄来临，周围一片安宁、静谧。 The silence of the forest was ripp
3、ed apart by a sound like a roaring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静） An absolute darkness ruled the forest.（描写黑暗） It didnt take too long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness.(描写森林变暗） Dark clouds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。 The darkness was so heavy it was like a thick blanket smoothing her. 黑暗是如此之重， 它像一个厚厚的
4、毯子抚平她的情绪。 The night sky was lit up by flashes of light. 一道道灯光照亮了夜空。 The clouds had spread and nearly covered the entire sky. 云彩扩散开来，几乎遮住了整个天空。 An air of sadness settled over the room. （描写悲伤氛围） It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tension.（描写紧张气氛） Time flies in the blink o
5、f an eye. 时间转眼即逝。 2.江河湖海、山川峡谷、草地花鸟江河湖海、山川峡谷、草地花鸟 The gurgle of the stream soothed me. （描写潺潺流水） A clear little stream ran quite merrily along its narrow way.(描写欢快的溪流） The lake mirrored the sky above.(描写天空映衬下的湖面） The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.（描写波光粼粼
6、的水面） The golden sunlight sparkled on the surface of the lake. 金色的阳光洒向湖面，波光粼粼。 The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine.（描写阳光下的沙滩） The meadow was a glorious expanses of grass and meadow flowers, grass rustling gently in the breeze. (描写青青草地) The grassy grassland also has a thin river, exposed t
7、o the sun, far away, like a shiny silver necklace. 绿草如茵的草原上还有一条细细的河，袒露在阳光下，远远看去，像一条发光的银项链。 Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.（山坡草坪） The setting sun cast an orange glow over the mountains. 橘红色的夕阳辉映着群山。 He was in a field of greenish white flowers that seemed to extend as far as the eye could re
8、ach. (满眼的绿色) The meadow flowed like a sea of green over the hill, studded with the purple of thistles.(描写漫山的花草） The valley seemed to grow quieter and quieter as he sat and stared at the bright delicate blueness. (描写山谷的寂静） It was a typical summer evening in June. The air was delicate and there was a
9、complete absolute silence. 这是六月一个典型的夏日傍晚。空气柔和清新，四周静悄悄的，没有一丝声响。 The air was rich with spring; the sun was warm and yellowed on the asphalt. 空气中洋溢着春天的气息；太阳暖洋洋的，柏油马路上铺着一层黄色的光。 On that day the mountain was full of flowers, and the trees had new greenleaves. 那天山上开满了花，树上也长出了新的绿叶。 The chirping birds welcom
10、ed our coming. 鸟儿啁啾，像在欢迎我们的到来。 The fragrant flowers attracted lots of birds, lingering around them.(描写花香鸟语） 3.天气，大自然，风雨雷电，阴晴冷暖，雾雪冰霜天气，大自然，风雨雷电，阴晴冷暖，雾雪冰霜 The sky is overcast（阴暗的）with dark and dense clouds. 乌云满天。 The dusk is gathering 暮色正浓 The wind had picked up. 风愈刮愈大。 It was getting dark and the win
11、d died away. 天渐渐黑了，风渐渐小了。 A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain. （描写微风拂柳） A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays of light glimmer and dance.（描写微风） The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描写微风） A gentle breeze came up, wrin
12、kling(使起皱) the surface of the lake. 一阵清风吹来，湖面掀起了涟漪 The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind.（描写狂风） The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风） The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight. 雨敲打在窗上，并向最后一缕阳光告别。 The wi
13、nd blew crazily and the rain began to fall like dogs and cats.狂风呼啸，紧接着大雨倾。 Wind and rain now whipped the house.（描写风雨击打窗户） The drizzle kissed me on my cheeks gently. （描写细雨） A fierce wind was roaring while the pounding rain was beating the ground. The rumble of thunder was heard in the distance.（描写风雨雷
14、电） The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.（描写雷声） Warm sunshine poured over the little bush. 温暖的阳光洒在小树身上. A glimmer of light spilled into the corridor. 一缕微光洒入走廊。 When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in.（描写阳光洒进窗户） When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-lik
15、e sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.（描写阳光） In the light of calm and golden sunset it becomes lovely beyond expression. 在安详而金灿灿的夕阳的余晖中,天地间非常壮美,难以言表。 The cozy sunshine filtered through the window, dancing and whirling in my eyes, sparkling with exhilaration.(阳光喜悦). 舒适的阳光透过窗户透过，在我的眼睛里跳舞和旋转，闪烁着
16、兴奋的光芒。 The mountain slope/ mountainsides was/were wrapped in a thin mist. 山坡上罩着一层薄雾。 The thick mists blurred（使模糊）the hills. 雾遮群山，朦胧不清。 The fog was beginning to clear and a full moon shone brightly. （描写雾气消散） The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(描写下雪） The wind h
17、owled, piling up snow in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust. (描写晚上下雪场景） The sounds of the insects, the chirping birds and the larger animals created a symphony of nature calling you deeper.(自然和谐). 昆虫、 叽叽喳喳的鸟和较大的动物的声音创造了一种大自然的交响乐，更深沉地呼唤你。 Branches of trees stretched leisurely into the sap
18、phire sky and the various flowers mingled into blaze of color.(自然) 树枝悠闲地伸展到蓝色的天空中，各种各样的花朵混杂成一起。 The mountain area is covered entirely in dense jungle. 山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。 We climbed up a winding track towards a mountain refuge. 我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。 Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scen
19、ery, we headed for the destination.沐浴在阳光下，享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发。 4.春夏秋冬春夏秋冬 My fingers lingered almost unconsciously on the familiar leaves and blossoms which had just come forth to greet the sweet southern spring. （描写春意盎然） That is an oil painting of a landscape in spring.那是一幅描绘春天景色的油画. The new spring g
20、rass shot up as time itself had sped up. (描写春草） The moor is lovely in spring and summer when there are flowers. It always smells so sweet. The airs so fresh, and the birds sing so beautifully.这片荒野春天和夏天都开满了花，可爱极了，连空气都是甜的。那儿的空气新鲜极了，鸟也叫得那么动听（形容美丽的荒野） An overwhelming torrent of heat flew through the atm
21、osphere, filled with uneasy discomfort. （描写夏天的热） There were no clouds in the burning sky, and it was too hot to think or feel. 炽热的天空中没有一片云，天热得让人无法思考，没有知觉。 In this heat even the trees appear defeated. (描写天气极热） The sun was burning, and there was a sound of the cicadas. 太阳火辣辣的烤着大地，不远处传来知了的声音。 The hot s
22、un tore the skin of the earth 火辣辣的太阳撕开了大地的皮。 The summer sun was scorching the land and there was no shade in the open street. 盛夏的阳光炙烤大地，坦荡荡的街上没有一块阴凉地。 Fallen leaves danced down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and welcoming the autumn in. (描写夏去秋来） The leaves crunched bene
23、ath my feet as I strolled down the street. (描写秋天脚下的落叶) Autumn was getting hold of the old oak-tree, its leaves were browning. 那颗老橡树染上了秋天的颜色，叶子逐渐变成黄褐色。 Autumn is a time of fabulous colors and colors burst from the trees like splattered paint. 秋天层林尽染，如泼洒的颜料般浓墨重彩。 Freezing winter marched into the villa
24、ge. (描写寒冬） It was bitterly cold now and the ground was frozen hard. 现在天气冷极了，地面都冻硬了。 A persistent, cold rain was falling, mingled with snow. 外面不停地下着冰冷的雨，间或还夹杂着一些雪片。 The snowflakes were dancing in the air, flying, hovering, falling straight and fast, and laying on the ground. 雪纷纷扬扬落下，那一片雪花在空中舞动着各种姿势，或
25、飞翔，或盘旋，或直直地快速坠落，铺落在地上。 The glittering snowflakes fell on the palm of my hand. They looked transparent. Slowly, they melted. 晶莹的小雪花落在我的手掌心上，看上去是透明的，慢慢地，它融化了。 The snowflakes were dancing in the air, flying, hovering, falling straight and fast, and laying on the ground. 大雪纷纷扬扬落下， 那一片雪花在空中舞动着各种姿势， 或飞翔，
26、或盘旋， 或直直地快速坠落，铺落在地上。 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue.(描写冬天的雪) The winter has been dreadfully severe , but the spring promises well.今年冬天一直是可怕的严寒，但春天可以期望会更好 5.夜空、日出日落夜空、日出日落 The garden looked so beautiful with the setting sun reflected in the windows.(描写夕阳） The st
27、ars in the night sky sparkled like diamonds. (描写星空） The stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.(描写星空） Stars faded out from the sky. 星星渐渐地从天空中消失了。 Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描写星空） All was quiet and there was only moonlight. 只有月光，周围一片寂静。 Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us. 星星点缀在空中，对着我们眨眼睛。
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