1、专题 25 开放式2018 年高考题【2018全国 I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：(1).到达时间；(2).合适的礼物；【参考范文】Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.Firstly, I would li
2、ke to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are
3、not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.If you have any other problems, please dont hesitate to contact me. Yours,Li Hua点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100 单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；应
4、对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100 单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。【2018全国 II】你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数 100 左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，
5、以使行文连贯。【参考范文】NoticeIn order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.To begin with, the
6、name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Whats more, every one of you will be welcome to enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your own comments.Student
7、UnionJune 8, 2018【2018浙江】写作第一节 应用文写作66. 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：（1）. 口语能力：（2）. 相关经验；（3）. 应聘目的。注意：（1）. 词数 80 左右；（2）. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Hearing that some volunteers are wanted to welcome the foreign students, I am gladly writing to
8、apply for this job.I do believe that I am very qualified for this voluntary work. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I have a good knowledge of English and I can communicate with native English speakers fluently. Secondly, I have some experience in accompanying foreign friends.I do believe the vol
9、unteer work will enable me to practise English more fluently and broaden my horizons.Looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Li Hua第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。2017 年高考题2017全国卷假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友 Leslie 学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1.
10、 时间和地点；2. 内容：学习唐诗；3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Leslie，I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now Ill tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dyn
11、asty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems. Be sure to go to the
12、 Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua2017全国卷假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1展览时间、地点；2展览内容。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】 Dear Henry，Im Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know youre interested in one
13、of Chinese traditional art formspapercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it. Itll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Gu
14、o Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like. You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special
15、 kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting. Looking forward to your early reply.Regards, Li Hua2017全国卷假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友 Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1球队活动；2报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Eric，I was informed that our school Pingpong Tea
16、m is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially pingpong.As you know, playing pingpong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.Would yo
17、u like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.Looking forward to your early reply.You
18、rs, Li Hua2016 年高考题1. 【2016全国新课标 I】书面表达（满分 25 分）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume） 。给外教 Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you t
19、o do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know if there are someth
20、ing to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己
21、的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语 In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语 hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句 if there are something to pay attention to 等。经典句式 this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume 也是文章的亮点所在。2.【2016全国新课标 II】书面表达（满分 25 分）假定你是李华，
22、你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友 Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1主题：环境保护；2展览时间；3投稿邮箱：.注意：1词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start
23、 from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely
24、a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to .Hope to hear from you soon.YoursLihua【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句 Any students who is interested in welcome to
25、 participate.时间状语从句 theme the last time you visited our school.条件状语从句 If you want to join；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文3.【2016全国新课标 III】书面表达（满分 25 分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob,Im sorry to say that I cannot
26、 go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If i
27、ts convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句 that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon 和 the change will not c
28、ause you too much trouble；目的状语从句 so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句 If its convenient for you；省略句 If not 等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文。【名师点睛】题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。4.【2016四川】书面表达（满分 25 分）某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Li
29、ke Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 你最喜欢的季节；2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受） 。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 题目已为你写好；3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。5.【2016浙江】书面表达（满分 30 分）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇 100-120 词的短文。要求如下：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。注意：1.文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：2.文中不得以任何形式透
30、露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better【答案】 One possible student versionPlanning Is Good ,But Doing Is BetterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contes
31、t last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.
32、 I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【解析】试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目判断作文主要介绍要将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能走题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章使用第
33、一人称和一般现在时，一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对 plan 的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语 in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to
34、等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句 how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。考点：考查开放式作文6.【2016江苏】书面表达（满分 25 分）81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, bu
35、t also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers dail
36、y work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer 冶 competition. He has already received three si
37、milar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1.
38、 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约 120 个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用 2 3 个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a
39、 dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addit
40、ion, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. T
41、hings will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting
42、, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it. In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong po
43、ints of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot
44、be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)【解析】2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。3.理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚。同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠。 （2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有
45、更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响。 （1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉。 （2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的词汇及句式，以增加获得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串联词，穿插使用陈述句、祈使句和被动句式，让文章更加丰富多样化。【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无
46、误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句. in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如 in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest 等等。考点：考查任务型读写2015 开放式1.【2015安徽】某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself as
47、an interviewer“为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview“ 为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括：1. 采访的对象；2. 采访的原因；3. 想提的问题。 注意：1. 词数 120 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview_【参考答案】A Famous Chinese I Would Like to InterviewThe person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal
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