1、Unit 4 Sharing,技法点拨,内容索引,典题示例,WritingNarration：writing about a person,技法点拨,写作指导,本单元的写作任务是写记叙文。记叙文是以记人、叙事、写景、状物为主要内容，以记叙、描写为主要表达方式的一种文体，通常分为三类： 1.以人物为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物来写一件事或两件事。 2.以事件为主的记叙文，即以事件为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件，可以写一个人或几个人。 3.以写景状物为主的记叙文。,应注意的是，在一篇记叙文中，写人、写景、写事往往是交织在一起的，不可截然分开，但各有侧重。 写记叙文通常应遵循以下几
2、点： 1.交代要素，即人、时、地、事。 2.按事件发生的先后顺序叙述，做到完整具体。 3.重点突出，目的明确，不要玩弄词藻，讲清言明即可。,写作时还要注意，用第一人称时主要是本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事；用第三人称时则主要是他人的经历和事情。记叙文所记的都是过去发生的事，所以原则上通常都用过去时态写，但有时也用历史现在时和戏剧现在时。,常用句式,1.He was born in China on Nov.13,1968. 2.He was a great man with the name of. 3.He was born into a poor family. 4.When at colleg
3、e，he majored in history. 5.He is interested in music. 6.His favourite sport is playing football. 7.He devotes himself to achieving his life goal. 8.He has made great contributions to our country.,典题示例,你们学校的英语校报最近开展了一次题为“My Favourite Teacher”的征文比赛。你计划报名参赛，写作对象是你的英语老师格林先生(Mr Green)，因为他讲课生动有趣，赢得了同学们的喜爱
4、。请你根据下列要点用英语写一篇关于他的文章参加比赛： 1.简要描述他的外貌； 2.喜欢他的原因。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,审题谋篇,写作要求是介绍最喜欢的老师，写作时应注意下面几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇记叙文。写作时注意记叙文的写作特点。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3.主体人称：由于是介绍一个人物，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。,my favorite teacher all the time make a joke whats more/moreover/furthermore/in addition cheer sb.
5、up regard.as.,_ _ _ _ _ _,要点词句,联想词汇 1.我最喜欢的老师 2.一直 3.说笑话 4.而且 5.使某人振作 6.把作为,句式升级 1.我们的英语老师格林先生只比我们大几岁，是一位非常特别的老师。Our English teacher Mr Green .He _.(简单句)Our English teacher Mr Green， ，is a really special teacher.(定语从句),is only several years older than us is a really special teacher,who is only sever
6、al years older than us,2.他个子很高，留着胡子，使得他看上去异常严肃。He is very tall and has a beard，_.(定语从句)He is a very tall man with a beard， . (现在分词短语作状语),which makes him look unusually,making him look unusually serious,serious,3.他好像是生来就能使课堂总是充满笑声。born able to make his class full of laughter all the time.(简单句)he is b
7、orn able to make his class full of laughter all the time.(it作形式主语),He seems to be,It seems that,My Favourite Teacher Our English teacher Mr Green who is only several years older than us，is a really special teacher. He is a very tall man with a beard，making him look unusually serious.It seems that he
8、 is born able to make his class full of laughter all the time.For example，he always has ways of giving us surprise，such as making a joke or singing a song and so on.Whats more，he can easily cheer up those who are in low spirits.,连句成篇,We have regarded him as our friend we can turn to when we are in trouble.Mr Green is indeed a good teacher to all of us.,
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