1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,典例展示,PART 3,写作训练,Period Six WritingWriting an e-mail,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,电子邮件是日常生活中人们进行交流的重要途径。 电子邮件与书信类似，一般由五部分组成：标题栏(Heading)，称呼(Salutation)，正文(Body)，信尾客套语(Complimentary)和落款(Signature)。 写电子邮件需要注意下列事项： 1.电子邮件的标题、收发地址等往往不作为考试内容。需要注意的是邮件正文的格式，要有称呼，亲朋好友或同事之间可以直呼其名，但对于长辈或上级最好使用头衔
2、加上姓氏。一般要在姓氏前加上如Dear，Mr，Mrs等。,写作指导,2.我们要根据收件人的身份和写信目的来确定电子邮件的语言风格，如申请工作时，其用语最好正式、庄重一些；网友之间交流时，则可简单、随意一些。 3.落款包括结尾客套语和署名。根据自己的喜好和与对方关系的亲疏，可以选择不同的结尾客套语。,1.开头常用句式： (1)Thank you for your e-mail of. (2)It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf of. (3)Im writing to you with reference to. (4)I would b
3、e grateful if you could. (5)I would like to know some information on. (6)I would appreciate it if you could.,常用表达,2.结尾常用句式： (1)Im looking forward to. (2)Wish you good health and remember me to. (3)Please give my best wishes to.,PART2,典例展示,经典示例 感悟体会佳作,写作要求 假设你是李华，你的朋友Tom在你的微信朋友圈中看到你分享的旅行照片，对此很感兴趣，并询问
4、相关情况，请你根据下面提示词给他回一封电子邮件。 1.上周六由班级组织； 2.采用的交通方式； 3.风景美丽，空气新鲜； 4.感受； 5.下周五的计划。,注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.邮件的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。,Dear Tom， How is everything going？Id like to tell you something about the journey.,范文展示 Dear Tom， How is everything going？Id like to tell you something about the journey. Before graduation
5、，a journey was organized by our class. The journey was scheduled for the last Saturday.Some students preferred to take a bus while some were fond of cycling.Also，some insisted that they should walk.Finally，we were persuaded to cycle. When we arrived there，we found ourselves in its beautiful view.We
6、saw many beautiful butterflies flying freely in the valley.The air there was so good to breathe that we could hardly wait to get close to nature.,查看答案,It was through the journey that we realized we should care about the environment.By the way，I am visiting you next Friday. Yours sincerely， Li Hua,查看
7、答案,PART3,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封100词左右的电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。 上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)； 中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)； 下午与我校学生游览海河。 注意： 1.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯； 2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：海河the Haihe River,1.本文要求写一封电子邮件
8、，给出了开头和结尾，故要注意正文部分的书写。 2.主体时态为一般现在时态，介绍活动计划等时可用一般将来时。 3.文章布局 (1)首段说明自己的身份并简要概述写此封电子邮件的目的：受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动； (2)第二段详细介绍此次活动的计划。分上午、中午和下午三个时间段介绍。此部分要做到要点齐全，层次清晰； (3)最后征求对方建议。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.乐于做某事 _ 2.为安排 _ 3.与某人交流 _ 4.带领某人参观 _ 5.玩得高兴 _,遣词造句,be pleased to do sth.,make arrangements for,communicate with sb
9、.,show sb. around/round,have a nice/good time,查看答案,查看答案,句式升级 1.上午在我校会议室将有一个座谈会，你们与我校学生将就校园生活、文化差异等话题进行交流。A forum is due to be held in the school meeting-room in the morning._ _ school life and cultural differences.(简单句)In the morning，a forum will be held in the school meeting-room，_ _ school life an
10、d cultural differences.(where引导定语从句；现在分词短语作伴随状语),visitors and students from our school will communicate with each other and talk about,You,you visitors and students from our school will communicate with each other，talking about,where,查看答案,2.中午邀请你们与我校学生一起在食堂用餐。午餐包括饺子、面条等中餐。At noon，you are invited to
11、have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school.We will _ dumplings，noodles and other Chinese foods.(serve)At noon，you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school，_ dumplings，noodles and other Chinese foods.(where引导定语从句),serve you,where you can ta
12、ste,查看答案,Dear Mr Smith， I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students Union，from Chenguang High School.,组句成篇,I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26.I am writing to tell you the arrangements we have made for you. In the morning，a forum will be held in the school meeting-
13、room，where you visitors and students from our school will communicate with each other，talking about school life and cultural differences.At noon，you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school，where you can taste dumplings，noodles and other Chinese foods.In the afternoon，the students in our school will show you around the Haihe River.,How do you like the arrangements? I hope youll have a nice time in Tianjin. Yours sincerely， Li Hua,查看答案,
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