1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,典例展示,PART 3,写作训练,Period Six WritingWriting a letter of advice,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出建议和忠告。建议信有可能写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务质量提出建议或忠告；也可能是写给个人，就其人生的某个重大决定提出自己的建议。 建议信的结构 建议信一般采取“三段式结构”，通常以firstly，secondly，thirdly或to begin with，then，last等依次陈述建议。 1.首段：首先说明写信的目的。针对对方对自己的信任简单地表示感
2、谢，也可表明自己的诚意。,写作指导,2.中段：围绕对方的问题，结构清晰、用语科学委婉地提出建议。注意要考虑到对方的实际问题，提出建议时要语气诚恳，用语得体，切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。可提供不止一个解决方案以供选择或就一个问题的不同方面提出建议。 3.尾段：简单表达希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。,1.I suggest that you should. 2.Here are my suggestions on how to. 3.The ways for you to.can be suggested as follows. 4.I feel it would be helpful i
3、f. 5.If I were you，I would. 6.Im sorry to hear/learn that. 7.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 8.Why not.? 9.It would be a good idea if you. 10.In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,常用表达,PART2,典例展示,经典示例 感悟体会佳作,写作要求 (2018全国) 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ter
4、ry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.到达时间； 2.合适的礼物； 3.餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,范文展示 Dear Terry， Nice to hear from you.I learn that youre coming to visit one of your Chinese friends.Im now writing to tell you some relevant details on Chinese customs. Generally speaking，your arrival s
5、houldnt be later than the fixed time.A few minutes earlier is the best.Besides，youd better bring some little gifts，such as a special food or drink from your country.Speaking of table manners，keep your voice low and pleasant during the meal.The host will like it if you have learned to use chopsticks.
6、,I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you.Im sure you will have a great time. Yours， Li Hua,PART3,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假设你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。 1.向Jenny表示问候和安慰。 2.针对她的问题提出以下建议： (1)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动； (2)同学遇到麻烦时，主动提供帮助； (3)当你遇到困难时，向同学求助。,注意： 1.词
7、数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：参加take part in,本文要求写一封回信，在信中给出安慰及建议，即写一封建议信。写作时要注意建议信的写作特点。时态用一般现在时。,审题谋篇,查看答案,必备词汇 1.进入高中 _ 2.不必 _ 3.为担心 _ 4.改变这种状况 _ 5.邀请某人做某事 _ 6.与某人交流 _,遣词造句,enter the high school,dont have to,worry about.,change this situation,invite sb. to do sth.,communicate
8、with sb.,句式升级 1.你不必为此过分担忧。You _ worry too much about it.(have to)_ worry too much about it.(There is no need for sb. to do sth. ),2.邀请一些同学一起参加课后活动，有助于你们通过交流互相了解。_ take part in some activities helps you understand each other better by communicating with them.(动名词短语作主语)Invite some of your classmates t
9、o take part in some activities，_ _.(非限制性定语从句),dont have to,There is no need for you to,Inviting some of your classmates to,which helps,you understand each other better by communicating with them,查看答案,3.随着时间的推移，你与别人接触越多，他们对你就越了解。_，the more you get in touch with others，the better they will know you.(w
10、ith复合结构)_，the more you get in touch with others，the better they will know you.(as引导的时间状语从句),With time going on,As time goes on,查看答案,Dear Jenny， I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.Id like to talk about it with you. In fact，in your senior high school，your classm
11、ates are also new and facing the same problem，so you dont have to worry too much about it.There is also something that you can do to change this situation.First，invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities，which helps you understand each other better by communicating with them.Then
12、，help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.,组句成篇,查看答案,As time goes on，the more you get in touch with others，the better they will know you.I believe you will make many new friends and will have a happy school life there. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua,查看答案,
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