1、,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Five WritingWriting about ones experiences,PART1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,以旅游为题材的书面表达是比较常见的一类写作形式，游记类的写作属于记叙文的范畴。游记就是将自己在游览过程中的所见所闻和所想记录下来，重在介绍风光景点、名胜古迹、风土人情等，抒发自己参观游览的体验感受。写这类记叙文应注意： 1.游记类的记叙文主要是按照时间顺序把旅游的过程介绍给别人。对于旅游的过程和感受，可以交叉进行，也可以在文章的最后写旅游感受。表达旅游感受可用感叹句。 2.要用过渡词或时间状语把旅游过
2、程的要点连接起来。 3.要融入真情实感。要把自己的思想感情融进文章里，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，这样可以丰富文章内涵，深化写作主题，使文章更具感染力。 4.文章时态主要用一般过去时态，但描述景色、旅游地概况或发表议论时可用现在时态。人称用第一人称。,写作指导,1.Last week，I paid a visit to Mount Emei in Sichuan Province with my family. 2.During the National Day holidays，I went to Beijing for five days with my classmates and
3、teachers. 3.There were so many animals in the Sea Museum，and some of them looked very lovely，for example，penguins，seals and more. 4.Then，we visited the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace，which were both good places to take pictures.,常用表达,5.Even though my travel seems really short，my memory of the p
4、leasant trip will last long. 6.Summer travel made me learn/get a lot of knowledge and understand a lot of history，legends and folklore(民俗).,PART2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,假如你叫李华，暑假去了西双版纳旅游。请你给你的美国朋友Helen写一封80词左右的信，告诉她西双版纳的风土人情。 1.西双版纳位于云南省南部，东南与老挝相连，西南与缅甸接壤，总面积为19 582平方公里，人口113万。 2.气候终年温暖湿润。 3.西双版纳环境优美，既是植物
5、王国又是动物王国，并被誉为“药材之乡”。 4.以泼水节的形式庆祝新年。 注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：老挝Laos；缅甸Burma；湿润humid；药材之乡a herb garden；泼水splash water,写作要求是根据提示写一篇游记，介绍西双版纳。写作时应注意下面三点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇游记，属于记叙文的范畴。 2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主，介绍西双版纳概况时可用一般现在时态。 3.主体人称：文章应该以第一人称为主。,审题谋篇,必备词汇 1.位于 _ 2.占地面积 _ 3.有人口 _ 4.盛产 _ 5.被称作 _,遣词造句,查看答案,lie in/b
6、e located in,cover an area of,have a population of,be rich in,be called,关键句式 1.It covers an area of 19,582 square kilometers. 它总面积为19 582平方公里。 2.It has a population of 1,130,000. 人口113万。 3.It impressed me most that people here splashed water on each other. 我印象深刻的是这里的人们互相泼水。,句式升级 1.用现在分词短语作状语连接句1和句2。
7、 _,Covering an area of 19,582 square kilometers, it has a population of 1,130,000.,查看答案,2.用what引导的主语从句改写句3。 _,What impressed me most was that people here splashed water on each other.,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。,组句成篇,It lies in the south of Yunnan Province with Laos to the southeast an
8、d Burma to the southwest.Covering an area of 19,582 square kilometers，it has a population of 1,130,000.The environment here is friendly.Its warm and humid all year long.Xishuangbanna is rich in animals as well as plants and is also called “a herb garden”. What impressed me most was that people here
9、splashed water on each other.I was told that they do this to celebrate the New Year.By the way，I bought some souvenirs and Ill give one to you as a gift.,Dear Helen， This summer I went on a tenday tour to Xishuangbanna.Xishuangbanna is one of the most beautiful places in China.,查看答案,Im looking forward to seeing you. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua,
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