1、Section Writing 介绍学校生活一、写作要领介绍学校生活，一般分为两种：一种是给出表达的主题、提纲材料；另一种是开放性作文，只给出主题或简单的提示。第一种作文较简单一些，只要按照所给材料把主题表达清楚，不遗漏要点即可；第二种作文复杂一些，要发挥主观想象，但不能偏离主题。这就要求在写作文之前要列出写作要点，关键词汇和句型。若写具体活动时，还需注意以下基本要求：1主题明确，内容充实。文章中的故事要有头有尾，要有高潮，要把何人、何事、何地、原因等几方面交代清楚，避免空乏、笼统的话。通过对人物、事物和景物的描写，表现出故事的主题和作者的思想感情。2层次分明，有条有理。记叙文除了有开头语及高
2、潮性的结尾外，还要注意描写的层次要清楚，挑选一些典型事例或细节加以合理安排，用最简单易行的方法，按时间的先后顺序进行描写。3主次分明，详略得当。叙述时还应注意主题鲜明、清楚、具体，内容真实感人，抓住典型事例。对中心事件和最能表现中心思想的地方，即主要情节加以详细描写，对次要情节则少写，不重要的东西可不写。 二、增分佳句1How time flies!2Ive made friends with . 3Ive made rapid/great progress (in . )4We did . in our spare time.5I took part in different/all kin
3、ds of afterschool activities.6When looking back at . 7I was impressed with .8.I won the competition.9I stood out in the English Speech Contest.10I tried out for (参加选拔) afterschool interest groups.题目要求假定你是李华，现在是高中二年级的学生，你的朋友 John 暑假过后将到你所就读的高中上学，他写信请你谈谈自己对高中生活的切身感受。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3可以
4、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John，Welcome to our school.Now summer vacation is nearly over. 第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇说明文；2确定人称：本文主要人称为第一人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：对 John 暑假过后到你所就读的高中上学表示欢迎。第二步：对高中学习生活做介绍。第三步：就自己的看法提出对高中生活的建议。第二步：核心词汇想周全1meanwhile/at the same time 同时2share 分享3take advantage of 利用4(be) faced w
5、ith 面对5as far as Im concerned 就我而言6adapt 使适应第三步：由词扩句雏形现1作为一名高中二年级的学生，我会和你分享我对高中生活的感受和想法。As a Senior Two student, I will share my feelings and ideas about high school life with you.2我们都知道，高中的学习对我们一生很重要，因此我们要把精力集中在学习上。We all know that the study of high school is important for our life, therefore we sh
6、ould focus our attention on studying.3然而，解决学习和业余活动的问题是一件很重要的事情。However, its an important thing to solve the problem about studying and amateur activities.4同时，我们也应该学会面对来自父母和社会的压力。At the same time, we also should learn to face the pressure from parents and society.5如果我们充分利用课堂上的时间，我们将有时间休息。If we fully
7、take advantage of the time in class, we will have time to have a rest.6面对父母的期望，我们应该让它作为动力。Facing parents expectation, we should make it as motivation.7就我而言，作为高中生，我们应该有我们自己的想法。In my view/opinion, as a senior student, we should have our own ideas.8此外，我们最好尽快适应高中的生活。Whats more, we had better adapt ourse
8、lves to the life of high school as soon as possible.第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用 it 作形式主语改写句 2It is known to us that the study of high school is important for our life, therefore we should focus our attention on studying.2.用 faced with 作状语改写句 6Faced with the parents expectation, we should make it as motivation.3用
9、 As far as Im concerned 改写句 7As far as Im concerned, as a senior student, we should have our own ideas.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear John，Welcome to our school.Now summer vacation is nearly over.You are to become a high school student.Meanwhile, you will start a new life.As a Senior Two student, I will share my f
10、eelings and ideas about high school life with you. It is known to us that the study of high school is important for our life, therefore we should focus our attention on studying.However, its an important thing to solve the problem about studying and amateur activities.At the same time, we also shoul
11、d learn to face the pressure from parents and society.If we fully take advantage of the time in class, we will have time to have a rest.Faced with the parents expectation, we should make it as motivation. As far as Im concerned, as a senior student, we should have our own ideas.Whats more, we had better adapt ourselves to the life of high school as soon as possible.I hope all of us can be admitted to universities.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
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