1、Section Writing 刻画人物形象刻画人物形象的文章，属于记叙文范畴，可以描写人的生平、简介、性格及某些方面的特点。在写这类文章时，通常以事件为载体，通过一件或几件事的描述来突出中心以及所描写人物的某种品质。一、基本结构这类文章的常见结构为：“总分总”结构，即总体介绍人物，之后再去叙述事件，最后对所描写的人物进行总结和概括。二、增分佳句1Sb.is considered to be one of the greatest . 2Wellknown as . , he . 3Born in a poor family, he had to . 4When he was a small
2、boy, he showed a great interest in . 5Thanks to the help of . , he was able to continue his education.6Between . and . , he studied at . 7From . to . , he first worked as . , and then he became . 8His achievements are worthy of praise.题目要求假定你是李华，你要向中学生杂志社推荐你的好朋友李莉来担任学生记者，以下是她的基本情况，请参照以下情况写一篇英语文章来描写李
3、莉：1性格特点：阳光，向上；爱好广泛，擅长文学，同时对历史有着浓厚的兴趣；爱好交友，在校学生会担任学生干部。2年龄：16 岁。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇记叙文；2确定人称：本文主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：点明写信的目的。第二步：对李莉的情况进行介绍。第三步：期望得到答复。第二步：核心词汇想周全1recommend 推荐2diligent 勤奋的3admiration 钦佩4be regarded as 被认为是5in the meanwhile 与此同时6mak
4、e friends 交朋友第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我给你写这封信推荐我的好朋友李莉来担任你们杂志的学生记者。I write this letter to you. I want to recommend my best friend Li Li to be a student reporter of your magazine.2作为一个 16 岁的阳光女孩，李莉在学校很勤奋刻苦。As a 16yearold sunshine girl, Li Li is very diligent and hardworking in school. 3她有许多爱好，这使我们同学们都很钦佩她。She has
5、 many hobbies and it has earned great admiration from us students.4文学是她的最爱，她的作文总是被认为是典范。Literature is her favorite, and her compositions are always regarded as model ones.5作为我校学生会的一员，她真的很喜欢交朋友。As a member of Students Union in our school, she really loves making friends.6就我而言，她可以结交更多的朋友，并通过加入文学俱乐部来提高
6、自己。On my part, she can make more friends and improve herself by joining the literature club.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用不定式作目的状语改写句 1I write this letter to you to recommend my best friend Li Li to be a student reporter of your magazine.2用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句改写句 3She has many hobbies, which has earned great admiratio
7、n from us students.3用现在分词(短语)作状语改写句 5 Being a member of Students Union in our school, she really loves making friends.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Editor，I write this letter to you to recommend my best friend Li Li to be a student reporter of your magazine.As a 16yearold sunshine girl, Li Li is very diligent and
8、 hardworking in school, and besides, she has many hobbies, which has earned great admiration from us classmates.Literature is her favorite, and her compositions are always regarded as model ones.In the meanwhile, she is very interested in history.Being a member of Students Union in our school, she really loves making friends.On my part, she can make more friends and improve herself by joining the literature club.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua
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