1、第 1 页（共 33 页）2019 年高考英语真题和模拟题分项汇编专题 10 书面表达一、2019 年高考真题1. 【2019全国卷 I】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意:：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your early reply. Yours,Li Hua.【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在
2、式。2.谋篇布局第 2 页（共 33 页）书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city ，advantages ，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中
3、是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如 First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【范文】Dear sir or madam,I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chines
4、e paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors
5、 understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours,Li Hua.【点睛】本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第 2 段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Paintin
6、g Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外 First of all, Besides, Last but
7、 not least 的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如 I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration 条件状语从句。第 3 页（共 33 页）2. 【2019全国卷 II】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Chris,Im writing to let you know that we w
8、ill have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after
9、 school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.Youre an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Lets try hard together!Cheers,Li Hua【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛
10、的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第第 4 页（共 33 页）三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。Im writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match 不定式作目 的 状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。3. 【2019全国卷 III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友 Allen 参加，内容包括:1.时间；2.活动安排；
11、3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And Im writing to invite you to join us.The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there
12、 will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes,Li Hua【解析】第 5 页（共 33 页）今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息
13、，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony 等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。4. 【2019北京卷】第一节 (15 分)假设你是红星中学高三学
14、生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于 50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim，_Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear Jim,Im pleased that youre coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around. Tianjin will be your next 第 6 页（共 33 页）stop. After
15、 that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友 Jim 打算暑假期间来北京、天津
16、和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎 Jim 来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that youre coming to tour in China.和 that you begin from Beijing, and Ill show you around.是宾语从句。 wh
17、ere you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。第二节(20 分)52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题 的 社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意：词数不少于 60。提示词：西瓜 watermelon第 7 页（共 33 页）_【答案】Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with
18、the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands. When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I
19、shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.【写作指导】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题第 8 页（共 33 页）的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用
20、第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.还使用了 At the class meeting, When I got home, On the farm, While working, When I came back home 等过渡词。5. 【2019天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师 Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座
21、内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给 Chris 写一封电子邮件:（1 ）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一） ；（2 ）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3 ）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1 ）词数不少于 100：（2 ）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3 ）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris，Im Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin第 9 页（共 33 页）【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的
22、要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will
23、send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity，you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my personal note，music is my priority.I am interested in all kinds of music，among which Jazz is my favorit
24、e. I want to know about the history of jazz，and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin一、评分原则1. 本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。3. 词数少于 100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。4. 评分时，应注意的
25、主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写 3 个单词从总分中减去 1 分，原则上不超过 3 分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其第 10 页（共 33 页）对交际的影响程度的情减分。6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1. 你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一） ；2. 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；3. 希望从中有何收获。三、各档次的给分范围和要求分数档 内容 语法结构和词汇 衔接和连贯 整体效果第五档21-25
26、分（很好）覆盖所有内容要点，并有适当发挥。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；表达准确、地道；有个别错误，但不影响对写作内容的理解。有效使用衔接手段，内容连贯，结构紧凑具备较强的语言运用能力；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16-20分（好）覆盖所有内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求；表达基本准确，些许错误对写作内容的理解影响不大。应用了简单的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的第三档1115分（一般）漏掉一些内容，覆盖部分内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求；有一些错误，对写作内容的理解造成了一定影响。应用了简单的连接成分，内容基本连贯。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第
27、二档6-10分（较差）漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，有一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；错误较多，且在很大程度上影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档15 分（差）明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。基本信息未能传达给读者。第 11 页（共 33 页）无关的内容，可能未理解试题要求0 分 未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。6. 【2019浙江卷】第一节 应用文写作(满分 15 分)假
28、定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex 即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1.表示感谢；2.回顾 Alex 对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数 80 左右；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ 【写作指导】 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇
29、积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】 第 12 页（共 33 页）Dear Chris,I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my Eng
30、lish. While studying in China, you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible. Yours,Li Hua第二节
31、概要写作 (满分 25 分)67.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.“ By giving kids a lot of praise, parent
32、s think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them.S
33、till, dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much. Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Expe
34、rts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.“ We should especially recognize our childrens efforts to push themselves and wo
35、rk hard to achieve a goal, “says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.“Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if hes out there every
36、 day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has 第 13 页（共 33 页）worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise sh
37、ould be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it._【思路点拨】 这是一篇概要类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，平时除了
38、加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。【范文】 Currently, contrary to what people did in the past, many parents think highly of their kids too often. It is not proper to praise children too much, but they cant do the opposite. It is said that what matters is not the quantity but the quality of praise. All in all, parents are supposed to praise their children in promotion to how much effort they make. 7. 【2019江苏卷】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。Li Jian
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