1、2019年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21 书面表达考点4 叙事描写类（一）【2019 天津市】假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法（l）一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢（2）地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵（3）你认为参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin to vomit；挤向座位 push towards the seat；争吵 have a quarrel要求：（1）词数：80100个；（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可
2、适当发挥。WednesdayWhen I took the underground back home from school, I noticed _【写作思路】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题【参考范文】WednesdayWhen I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me（开篇点明题意）The first thing I met is about
3、 a boyThe boy didnt feel wellHe began to vomitA beautiful girl saw the boyShe helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】Then the boy thanked her for helpingThe second thing is about the undergroundWhen the underground got to the stationa lot of people pushed towards the seatSo some people couldnt get off the
4、 undergroundSome had a quarreel because of this（介绍碰到的两件事情）In my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this societyAs for the undergroundIt shows your quality thereIf you wait in a line，others will get off the underground easilyIf all of us can do in this way，our world wi
5、ll be more beautiful【高分句型二】（表达自己的观点结尾）【名师点评】（1）高分句型一：She helped him clean the floor.help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事。这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面。（2）高分句型二：If all of us can do in this way，our world will be more beautiful.If引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态。这句话意为：如果我们所有人都这样做，我们的世界将会变得更加美好。（二）【2019 四川省自贡市】初中三年的学习生活让人难忘
6、，毕业之际，你校将举行感恩为主题的英文演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿要点提示：1感谢父母，教我如何生活，2感谢老师，教我许多知识，3感谢同学，给我美好回忆，写作要求：1词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；2可适当增减词汇，使语句流畅、完整；3文中不能透露个人真实信息Good morning， everyone Im glad to be here to speak in front of you Here Id like to thank everyone of you_That s all Thank you【写作思路】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑
7、如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题【参考范文】Good morning，everyoneIm glad to be here to speak in front of you Here Id like to thank everyone of youHow time flies! We ll graduate soon I have so many words from my heart to sayAt this moment，I want to say thanks to my parents，my t
8、eachers and my classmates（开篇点题）Dear dad and mom， youve taken good care of me in the past three yearsWhen I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me upYou taught me how to get on well with my classmates（感谢父母亲的关心，鼓励）Dear teachers，thank you for teaching me so wellI wont forget how interesti
9、ng your lessons are and how friendly you areI still remember when I failed in an exam， you encouraged me to keep trying 【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life， you told me to be brave Because of your help，I have made much progress（感谢老师在学习上和生活上的帮助）Dear classmates， youve helped me a lot in my studies since
10、 I came to this school【高分句型二】 When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and give me some adviceI never forget the days when we studied together（感谢同学的帮助，鼓励，留下的美好回忆）Words cant show my thanks to you!Ill remember all of youThat s all Thank you【名师点评】（1）高分句型一：I still remember when I failed in an exam
11、，you encouraged me to keep trying我还记得当我考试不及格时，你们鼓励我继续努力I still remember 后跟了宾语从句，宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句，encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事（2）高分句型二：Dear classmates， youve helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school亲爱的同学们，自从我来这里以来，你们在我的学习中帮了我很多忙 since自从，引导时间状语从句，主句用了现在完成进行时，从句用了一般过去时（三）【2019 重庆
12、市B卷】假如你参加了学校组织的“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动。请根据要求，向某英语网站投稿，分享活动经历。要求：1.80120词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine! _【写作思路】本文属于一篇图表作文，根据表格提供的信息来介绍“走近乡村”寒假社会实践活动的经历。人称为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料确定写作内容；文章必须包括要点中
13、所给的信息，既要写活动的过程，又要总结活动感受与收获。并补充两条个人的观点。表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。多种句式交叉使用来丰富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before. 我们经历了农村的生活，学到了一些我们以前从书中得不到的东西。that we couldnt get from books before.是定语从
14、句，修饰不定代词something。2. We really hope well have another activity like that this winter vacation! 我们真的希望今年寒假还能有这样的活动！hope后面是省略that的宾语从句。【参考范文】Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine.During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the school ac
15、tivity “Get close to the countryside”. We live in the famers homes. Their great living conditions surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetables come from? We got the answer when working with the farmers. Besides, we learned about other plants and some farm animals. How interesting!We experienced
16、the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldnt get from books before, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to save food. We were happy to see the farmers life was getting better and better. We really hope well have ano
17、ther activity like that this winter vacation!（四）【2019 山东省潍坊市】请根据上文内容和下列问题提示进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：1.续写故事的词数为80左右； 2. 展开合理想象，适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 可根据需要自主选用以下参考词汇： Call the police dangerous escape catch robber (强盗)_【写作思路】这是一篇根据短文内容和图表提示，要求续写一个完整的故事。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料
18、中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第三人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。【参考范文】A“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my car .” Andrea thought .Then she breathed deeply and called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , the police came to her .A
19、ndrea pointed to the direction the “old lady” might be in .Then the police drove along the road to look for “her” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the “old lady” was still standing by the road .The police stopped and said , “Hello ,madam .Wed like to take you to Brockboune ,Get
20、in ,please .” BHow dangerous! What should I do? Andrea said to herself He must be a thief or robber .” As soon as she realized this, Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had happened ,then she left .When Andrea got home, she told her parents all about the old lady. Aft
21、er hearing the story, her parents hugged her tightly and said ,”What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enough to protect yourself .We are proud of you!” An hour later, the police phoned her that they had caught the man-a real robber.【名师点评】重点短语：as soon as一就，call the police报警，be proud of为感到骄傲（五）【
22、2019 江苏省苏州市】人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次。请根据提示，就你的第一次写一篇短文。 内容包括：1. 第一次的整个过程；2. 你的感受。 要求：1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time _【写作思路】这是一篇材料作文，根据提示信息，选择给你印象深刻的第一次活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受。时态主要为一般过去
23、时，人称主要为第一、三人称。写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文。首先开门见山，介绍自己的第一次活动是什么，接下来详细介绍第一次活动的整个过程，最后谈一谈自己的感受。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。注意： 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范，避免出现拼写错误；词数在80100。【参考范文】The first time to learn to swimAs we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time to lea
24、rn to swim. Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me to swim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very patient. He encouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water fir
25、st. Then, He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldnt move. But I never gave up. I felt safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I could swim by myself. Although I couldnt swim very well, I was very happy.I will never forg
26、et this experience, because I not only learned how to swim, but also learned to be brave!（六）【2019 浙江省宁波市】回顾初中三年。有许多事令人难忘。校英语报如Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文。假如你是李华，请你选择其中一个话题, 并结合具体事例, 用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加此次征文活动。要点如下：say thanks to_say sorry to_1. be not good at.2. encourage me to3. make great progres
27、s4.1. argue with2. not talk to each other3. regret doing4.注意：(1) 短文必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当拓展； (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； (3) 词数：80-100，书信格式已给出； (4) 首句供参考Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say.Dear _,_Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这个作文要求我们从题目中给出的两个话题中选择一个，并结合具体事例，用英语写一封信表达你对某个人的谢意或歉意，参加学校英语报的一个征文活动。题目中利用表格的形式
28、展示了两个话题的主要结构，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。文章内容应包括：首先确定一个话题和人物；然后具体说明你感谢他或者向他道歉的原因，这是文章的主体部分，叙述应详细，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感谢或歉意，并表达祝愿。写作时应注意：首先文章内容应完整、充实，注意分清段落和层次；其次需注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。句式结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句直接使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【参考范文】范文1
29、 Dear Alice,Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you ha
30、d a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.Yours,Li Hua范文2 Dear Alan,Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say sorry to you for arguing
31、with you.When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didnt talk to each other.I have
32、been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Lets forget about the past and become good friends again.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向自己的同学表达了感谢或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表达了感谢，并详细介绍了Alice帮助自己学习英语的过程；第二篇作文向Alan表达了歉意，介绍了由于足球比赛失利，互相埋怨，产生矛盾的过程，并表达了自己的悔意。文章内容都非常丰富，叙述也很完整、详细。两篇作文都使用了正确的时
33、态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。注意了谓语动词过去式形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式结构完整，语言得体、地道，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如第一篇里When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.。再如第二篇中When we we
34、re in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal.、Lets forget about the past and become good friends again.等等。（七）【2019 临沂市】时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写
35、一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；2.不少于60词。提示：l. What did you use to be like?2. What is the most important change?3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.I have changed a lot!_【写作思路】本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。【参考范文】I have changed
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