1、精准培优专练2020届高三好教育精准培优专练培优点二十 书面表达一、真题在线（2019全国I书面表达）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Im LiHua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chine
2、se Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides
3、, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would ap
4、preciate it if you could take my application into consideration.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3.关键词根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of
5、，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate，take my application into consideration通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。【点睛】本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的；第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，an outgoing boy, who is study
6、ing in London.此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing
7、Chinese paintings.使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。另外First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。2精准培优专练二、 对点专练（专练1）目前，你校有许多学生因为各种原因很少参加体育锻炼。假定你是张华，请你就此事向你校英语报写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。内容包括：1. 学生们不参加体育活动的原因；2. 进行体育活动的好处。注
8、意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文章开头和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, most students dont do sports for kinds of reasons._Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua【答案】Dear schoolmates,Nowadays, most students dont do sports for kinds of reasons. They think that it is a waste of time and we may get injured
9、in the process.In my opinion, it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities. First, by doing some sports, like playing football, pingpong and so on, we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time in class. There is no doubt that when we get back to study, we can study better.
10、Second, doing sports is good for our health, so we will be unlikely to fall ill. Third, doing sports can help us form a new hobby, like swimming, hiking and so on. In this way, our life will be more colorful.In all, we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求写
11、一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。话题贴近考生生活，比较好写。所给要点非常明确，所以考生根据提示，文章可以分为两大部分：首先阐述学生们不参加体育活动的原因，然后陈述进行体育活动的好处。考生根据提示先列出主体句，然后再拓展细节内容，以使文章内容丰满，避免内容空洞。（专练2）假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Carl今年暑假将来四川旅游，现发来邮件向你询问有关情况。请回复邮件，内容包括：1.四川简介；2.推荐景点及理由；3.邀请他到家做客。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Carl,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Carl,I am glad that
12、you are coming to Sichuan this summer vacation. I have told my parents and they are happy about it too.Located in western China, sichuan is an important junction of southwest, northwest and central regions, and an important intersection and traffic corridor connecting southwest and northwest China a
13、nd central Asia, South Asia and southeast Asia. It covers an area of 486,000 square kilometers, ranking the 5th in China. It is Chinas largest province in terms of resources, population and economy. Sichuan province has lots of famous places which are well-known around the world. Such as, Jiuzhai Va
14、lley which is famous for its beautiful lakes. They are colorful with clear water which you can see the bottom. Dujiangyan Irrigation has two thousand history. It is still used now. And the other famous place is Wolong reservation which is famous for pandas. There are lots of local dishes, too. Hot p
15、ot is the most delicious of all. I sincerely invite you to my home. We will have hot pot together. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.YoursLi Hua【解析】这是一篇应用文中的书信写作。题目要求假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Carl今年暑假将来四川旅游，现发来邮件向你询问有关情况。请回复邮件，内容包括：1.四川简介；2.推荐景点及理由；3.邀请他到家做客。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。好教育云平台教育因你我而变3
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