Unit 9.4 Writing--七年级英语人教版（上册）培优讲义含答案

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1、 【话题分析】本单元写作要求同学们能谈论学校功课安排，能表达个人对其爱好与否并说明理由。 1. 能准确运用类似 at 8：30，from 10：00 to 10：45，on Monday，on Friday afternoon 等短语来表述时间； 2. 能结合语境准确使用 because，but，and，then，after that 等连接词。 【典例】假如你是周娟，请根据下面表格中的内容写一封电子邮件，把你星期五的活动情况告诉你的好朋 友 Cindy。 Friday Time Subjects/Activities Time Subjects/Activities 8：008：50 Chi

2、nese 12：001：00 Lunch 9：009：50 Math 1：001：50 Music 10：0010：50 English 2：002：50 Geography 11：0011：50 Art 3：005：00 Play basketball 要求：1. 语句通顺、条理清楚； 2. 70 词左右(不含所给单词)。 _ _ _ _ _ 【佳作展示】 Dear Cindy, Im busy on Friday. At 8：00 I have Chinese. Its my favorite subject. Then I have math from 9：00 to 9：50. Its

3、 very difficult. After that I have English. It is fun. The last lesson in the morning is art. Lunch is from 12：00 to 1：00. I have music from 1：00 to 1：50. Its relaxing. And then I have geography. Its easy. After school, I play basketball with my classmates. How about you? Whats your favorite subject

4、? A 假设你是 Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友 Tom 写一封邮件， 告诉他有关你的初中生活。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； 3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。 What is your school like? 20 个班级；900 多位教师；很现代 How is your school life? 周一至周五步行上学； 每周五节英语课 最喜欢的科目是因为 吃健康的午餐； 很少吃零食； What do you do

5、in your free time? 喜欢听音乐；擅长篮球； 周末有时打电脑游戏； What is your feeling anout your school life? (自拟一点) Dear Tom. Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, Id like to tell you about my school life. _ _ _ _ _ Would you like to tell me about your school life? Yours, Mike B 假如你

6、叫王莉，13 岁。请用英语写一篇介绍自己相关情况的书面材料。 内容要点如下：1. 擅长于数学和英语，乐于帮助同学。 2. 喜欢听音乐，打篮球； 3. 喜欢吃健康食品（如：水果、蔬菜、鱼和牛奶） ；对身体有好处。 4. 喜欢和同学去购物中心买东西； 5. 喜欢牛仔裤和运动鞋，因为轻便舒适。 注意：1. 词数 70 左右，书面材料的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 My name is Wang Li. _ _ _ _ _ _ C 假设您的名字是李华,给你新认识的朋友 Jim 发个 e-mail ,介绍您自己的基本情况（年龄，学习的班级， 爱好，家庭情况等可适当发挥） 要求：1 文中不得出现真实的人

7、名和校名等相关信息。 2 词数不少于 60 词。 _ _ _ _ _ _ D 假设你是 Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友 Tom 写一封邮件，告 诉他有关你的初中生活。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； 3. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。 What is your school like? 20 个班级； 900 多位教师； 很现代； How is your school life? 周一至周五步行上学； 每周五节英语课； 最

8、喜欢的科目是因为 吃健康的午餐； 很少吃零食； What do you do in your free time? 喜欢听音乐； 擅长篮球； 周末有时打电脑游戏； What is your feeling anout your school life? (自拟一点) Dear Tom. Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, Id like to tell you about my school life. _ _ _ _ _ Would you like to tell me a

9、bout your school life? Yours, Mike A Dear Tom. Long time no see! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, Id like to tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students. From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. E

10、very week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it is interesting. I have healthy lunch and I seldom eat snacks. In my free time, I enjoy listening to music. Im good at playing basketball. At weekends, I sometimes play computer games. I think my school life is very interesting an

11、d colorful! Would you like to tell me about your school life? Yours, Mike B My name is Wang Li and Im 13 years old. I am good at Maths and English. I like to help my classmates. I enjoy listening to music and playing basketball. I like having healthy food such as /like fruit , vegetables, fish and m

12、ilk. Its good for my health. I like doing some shopping in the shopping mall with my classmates. I love wearing jeans and trainers because they are light and comfortable. 【写作亮点】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中给我们介绍了王莉的一些基本情况，内容全面，没有遗漏要点。其次短 文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语句符合英语的表达规范。另外，短文中使用了一些好的句型和句式，如 I am good at Maths and English

13、 中短语 be good at；还有一些表示喜欢做某事的句型如 I like to help my classmates、I enjoy listening to music and playing basketball、like having healthy food、I love wearing jeans and trainers 等。短文中还用到了一些连词，如并列连词 and，从属连词 because 等。这使得整篇短文的意思非常 连贯，表达更加流畅。 C Dear Jim, I would like to tell you something about myself. I am a

14、 student. I am thirteen years old. I am in Class One, Grade One in No. 2 Middle School in Guigang. I like English very much. I think you can help me with my English. There are four people in my family. My father is an office worker and my mother is a Chinese teacher. My sister is a student, too. She

15、 is in Grade Two. I have a happy family. Lets be good friends and help each other. Please write soon. All the best! Yours, Lihua 【写作亮点】 这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如 I would like to tell you something about myself.等，I think 等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。学科&网 D Dear Tom, Long time no see! Are you OK? I study

16、in my new school for half a year. Now, Id like to tell you about my school life. My school is very modern. We have 20 classes. And there are over 900 teachers and students. From Monday to Friday, I walk to school. Every week, I have five English lessons. I like English best because it is interesting

17、. I have healthy lunch and I seldom eat snacks. In my free time, I enjoy listening to music. Im good at playing basketball. At weekends, I sometimes play computer games. I think my school life is very interesting and colorful! Would you like to tell me about your school life? Yours, Mike 【亮点说明】 文章主要写初中的生活，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使 用很多短语， 让文章更加出彩， 如 there are， From Monday to Friday， have five English lessons , like English best， In my free time，enjoy listening to music 等。在平时的学习中，要注意点滴积累，这样在写作文时才能灵活 运用。