2020-2021学年新目标人教版八年级下英语全册写作讲解及范文

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1、第一单元第一单元 开头 I am sorry to hear that you are having problems with your health/friends/family/study these days.(书 信) Im going to talk about how to keep healthy/how to get on well with your friends/family/ how to study well.(非书信) Dont worry. Its not a big deal./Its not very difficult. Here is my advice

2、 to you. 中间段 First, its very important to +V 原形(have a rest/communicate with.) second, you should/youd better +V 原 Besides, why not +V 原? According to me, it might be very useful to +V 原 At last,/finally,/last but not least, +祈使句 结尾段 I hope you can be better soon. I hope you can solve your problem s

3、oon. Wish my advice can help you/be useful. 假如你是 Mary，你的朋友 Ann 最近身体不适，总感到很累。请根据下列的提示内容给 Mary 写一封邮件，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。80 词左右,开头与结尾已给出,但不计 入总词数。 提示: 1.多喝热水;好好休息;最好去看医生; 2.不要熬夜;压力不要太大 【参考范文】 Dear Ann, Im sorry to hear that you are not feeling well.You said you felt very tired all day. I think you should

4、drink a lot of hot water and have a good rest.You shouldnt go to bed late.Dont be under too much pressure, and try to relax yourself.You can play basketball with your friends after school. If you still dont feel better, youd better go to a doctor and take some medicine. I hope you will feel better s

5、oon. Yours, Mary 疫情文章 身体健康的建议 As we all know, because of Novel coronavirus（新冠肺炎）, we Chinese have had a special Spring Festival. Nobody wants to get the disease（疾病）, but how should we protect ourselves? Here is my advice about how to keep healthy. First, we should try not to go outdoors and we shoul

6、d avoid（避免） going to the places where there are many people. Second, whenever we go out, we should wear antiseptic masks（口罩） . They can protect us from catching the terrible disease. And then, we should develop a habit of washing our hands frequently, since these virus can hide on our skin. Last but

7、 not least, we should drink more water, have more rest and do proper sports at home, which will certainly make us stronger. Because It can not only keep you healthy, it also enhances your immune system（免疫系统） and reduce the possibilities of getting ill（降低患病可能性）. In conclusion/ All in all/ In a word,

8、I believe we can keep healthy, if we follow the advice above. 第二单元第二单元 申请、主动提供帮助类 开头（介绍身份、点明意愿） I am XXX, a middle school student. I know you need new members for your volunteer group. I want to be one of you/I am interested in it/I want to volunteer as . 中间段（分三层：有能力、有态度、有时间） First, I often help . w

9、ith ./I am good at/do well in. Second/Besides, I want to be a volunteer for a long time. So I will try my best to do it well. At last,/last but not least, /The most important thing is that I am free to help in/on/during. 结尾段（最后点题，恳求机会） I hope I can be a member of your group. If so, I will try my bes

10、t. If I am lucky enough to get this chance, I will try my best. If I can get this chance, I will try my best. I am looking forward to your reply! 介绍志愿者活动计划 开头 I took part in a voluntary activity in+地点+时间 with my friends. Let me tell you the whole things. （已发生） Im XXX. I want to volunteer as .Id like

11、 to/Let me tell you my volunteering plans.（未发生） 中间段 I helped /will help +人 +with. What about XXX? He/She helped /will help As for XXX, he/she helped /will help 结尾 What a meaningful day we have/will have! 范文 2： Everyone needs help and if we help others, we may also get something that is valuable. My

12、classmates and I went to the old mans home to take part in community activities last Sunday. We took the school bus to Kang Le old folks home. The old people were very excited about our coming. And We helped them do a lot of things in the old folks home. First, I listened to them and talked to them.

13、 Then, I read newspapers to the old people. Whats more, I sang and danced for them. Because I know a lot of old people are lonely. They need to be cared and listened to. And were all going to be old one day. As students, we like to take part in Community activities and help the old people are our re

14、sponsibilities. I believe that the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others. And helping others is the traditional for our Chinese, we should carry it out on any condition. You will feel happy and satisfied when helping others. So please give a hand to the people

15、in need. 第三单元第三单元 表达观点（家务分担） 开头（引出论题，点明观点） These days, more and more students/parents believe that. As for me, its everyones duty to do chores. / Its necessary for us to do chores. Let me tell you the reasons. 中间段（列举三个理由） First, doing chores can help the kids become more independent. And they can ta

16、ke good care of themselves in the future. Whats more, . Last but not least, once the kids help with housework, their parents may have more free time. And they can get on well with their parents. 结尾 What do you think of it? / Whats your opinion? 做家务是每个家庭成员应尽的义务。 平时你帮父母做哪些家务？在做家务的过程中有什么体会？ 今年寒假期间你做了什么

17、家务？有何感受？请你根据下列提示词写一篇英文短文，词数 80 词 左右。 提示词：do chores, learn to do sth. , boring, tiring, unforgettable 【审题】 1. 人称以第一人称为主 2. 时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 3. 体裁为记叙文 【写作要点】 1. 文章的内容必须包括题干中所提的所有问题 2. 注意几个要点之间的衔接 【提分词汇】 water flowers, take good care of, feel happy to do sth. , enjoy , experience 【提分句型】 1. It took me m

18、ore than one hour to finish 2. It was really an unforgettable experience. 【参考范文】 When Im free, I often help my parents do chores like doing the dishes, cleaning the rooms and watering flowers. By doing these things, Ive learned to take good care of myself and my family. Housework is boring and tirin

19、g, but I really feel happy to do something for my family. Sometimes doing housework can be enjoyable. It is also a kind of exercise. During the winter vacation, I cooked some delicious food for my family. It took me more than one hour to finish the cooking. We enjoyed the dinner while watching TV. I

20、t was really an unforgettable experience. I think we all should help do what we can in our family. 对于做家务的看法范文： Different people have different ideas about doing chores. Let me tell you my opinion. I think it is necessary for children to learn to do chores. Doing chores can help children to understan

21、d the idea of fairness and develop their sense of responsibility. Whats more, it can help them become more independent. First, we should understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home. It our duty to share housework with our parents. Second, if we can do some cho

22、res in our free time when parents come home tired from work, they will be glad to see that. And doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. This will help us to grow up to be independent and responsible adults. This is my opinion. What about you? 第四单元第四单元 进入青春期，每个人在学习，生活，人际交往中总会出现一些问题，倾诉

23、问题并寻求帮助 才是最好的解决办法。因此，你准备向学校心理辅导室的老师反映一下你最近的烦恼。 请你用英语给老师写一封信，提出你在学习，和朋友相处，与家人关系三方面所遇到的问 题，并表示希望得到帮助。 （1） 80 词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数） ； （2） 可适当发挥，使行文通顺连贯。 Dear Teacher, Im a student in Grade 8. These days I have some problems, and I dont know how to deal with them. _ _ Can you offer me some suggestions?

24、Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Lost 【审题】 1. 人称以第一人称为主 2. 时态以一般现在时为主 3. 体裁为应用文 【写作要点】 1. 文章的内容必须包括学习，和朋友相处，与家人关系三方面所遇到的问题 2. 三个问题需要详细描述，并衔接紧密 【提分词汇】 stress, in order to do sth. , whats worse, compare, pressure, care about, last but not least, have a fight with sb. 【提分词汇】 1. First

25、 of all, I have so much stress from study that 2. Which gives me a lot more pressure. 3. Just as a saying goes 【参考范文】 Dear Teacher, Im a student in Grade 8. These days I have some problems, and I dont know how to deal with them. First of all, I have so much stress from study that I cant even sleep w

26、ell at night. In order to get into a good high school, I spend almost all my free time, including weekends, studying and taking after-school classes. Whats worse, my parents always compare me with other children, which gives me a lot more pressure. I feel that the only thing they care about is my gr

27、ades. Last but not least, I have a fight with my best friend because he likes copying my homework. Just as a saying goes, “ A friend is easier lost than found. “ I dont know what I should do to keep my best friend. Can you offer me some suggestions? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours

28、, Lost Dear Frank, Ive received your letter and I know you argued with your parents. I really worry about you. Here is my advice. First, you should understand and respect your parents and get on well with them. Its best for you to try to think why parents did that. I believe that all the parents lov

29、e their kids, so its necessary for the kids to understand parents. Second，I think that you should make an apology to（向某人道歉） your parents when parents are unhappy. Once you say sorry to them, theyll forgive you and your relationship will get better. Whats more，its necessary for you to sit down and co

30、mmunicate with you parents. Because communicating with parents is the best way to solve your problems. And in order not to make similar mistakes, you should write important things on a piece of paper. Otherwise（否则） ， relations between you and your parents will become worse and worse. Please be happy

31、 and everything will be better. 第五单元第五单元 开头（讲清事件时间地点） 描述过去经历 An important event that I remember well was. It happened in/on +时间+at/in+地点 中间段（介绍人物活动，一般三组） At that time, XXX was doing. What aboutXXX? xxx was doing . while XXX was doing As for xxx, she/he was doing . 结尾 This event is very iimportant to

32、 me because. I remember this event well because. 假如你是李磊， 今天英语老师让大家分组讲述各自的周末生活， 你被小组成员推选为代表。 请你根据以下表格，用英文向同学们描述一下你们组的成员在昨天的以下时间里在做什么。 Activity Time Name 9:00 a.m. 2:00 p.m. 6:00 p.m. Linda Reading Doing her homework Cooking Paul Playing football Studying math Taking a shower Zhang Xin Listening to mu

33、sic Washing clothes Having dinner 要求： 1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥。 2. 不少于 70 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a.m. yesterday._ _ 【审题】 1. 人称为第三人称为主 2. 时态以过去进行时为主 3. 题材为说明文 【写作要点】 1. 文章的内容必须涵盖表格所给的全部信息 2. 在符合逻辑的情况下可适当发挥。 【提分词汇】 1. Linda was doing her homework while P

34、aul was studying math. 2. What was doing? 【参考范文】 All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a.m. yesterday. Paul was playing football in the playground and Zhang Xin was listening to music at that moment. At 2:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was doing her homework while Paul was studying

35、math. What was Zhang Xin doing then? She was washing clothes. At 6:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was cooking dinner, but Zhang Xin was having dinner. She had dinner earlier than Linda. Where was Paul? He was taking a shower in the bathroom. Dear Bob, How time flies! During my life，there was one thing tha

36、t I will never forget. In January 2020, just at the time we celebrate the beginning of the new year, a sudden and terrible epidemic（传染病） breaks out（爆发）. Its called the coronavirus. The virus spread so fast among people. And because of the virus, a lot of people get sick at the same time. We Chinese

37、have had a special Spring Festival this year. People who get sick might cough very badly and have a fever. And they could die if they dont get any treatment. Luckily, many brave doctors and nurses were helping sick people. Brilliant scientists are working on new medicines. All of these heroes, Zhong

38、 is the one that touched me the most. Zhong Nanshang, who was over eighty years, risked losing his life rush to the front line of the battle as soon as possible. He told us the truth of the epidemic situation. He worked day and night to save more and more lives. When I saw him standing in front of t

39、he cameras and saying some inspiring words. I dont feel so scared any more. He gave us the confidence to fight with the virus. Because of those lovely heroes, we can now live a happy life. I want to say to all the heroes, thank you for your efforts and dont forget to protect yourselves. We are waiti

40、ng for you to come back safely. Yours, Helen 第七单元第七单元 描述英雄和传统故事 开头（介绍故事人物、背景） Once upon a time/Long long ago/ A long time ago, there was XXX/there used to be / there lived a man named xxx. Let me tell you the story about him/her. 中间段（讲故事，如果给了中文情节，尽量转化到所学表达） One day, . 结尾 The story shows us to be bra

41、ve/friendly/honest/adj. .is very important. The story shows that+句子 From this story, I learn that. 范文 1： Journey to the West is one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. It tells a story about a Chinese monk named Xuan Zang who went for some Buddhist scriptures. It shows us a lar

42、ge quantity of characters.First The monk, called Xuan Zang, is an idealist adi:lst who is as weak as a kitten and just sets there helplessly for help when he gets into trouble. But he is really kind and great, trying to dispel the darkness and ignorance in peoples heart. Second, the monkey named Wu

43、kong is born from a stone and he owns extraordinary powers and amazing intelligence that he uses to overcome monsters. Third, The pig is Ba jie. He loves beauty and he always makes a mess and generates a lot of humor in the process. Whats more, Sha Seng. He is very modest, diligent and serious. And

44、he takes care of the monk and colleagues. The Journey to the West has excited the children of China for many years. And as soon as the TV program came out more than 30 years ago, children became interested in reading this story. Now I hope everyone can read and enjoy this novel! 濒危动物 The 1st paragra

45、ph 简单介绍这种动物： 1. 外貌；2. 生活习性；3. 本领 The 2nd paragraph 谈谈这种动物的现状和濒危的原因：food, place, water, humans. The 3rd paragraph 保护这种动物的措施： In order to protect ., we should. To protect., we should not. 题目 1 假如你是李雷，你的美国朋友 Jack 对中国的大熊猫很感兴趣，请根据以下提示给他写封信介 绍一下这方面的情况。 内容包括：1.大熊猫的特点，习性；2.大熊猫的生存现状和环境；3.如何帮助保护大熊猫。 注意：短文中不允许

46、出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 I. 开头大熊猫的特点（外表如身长，体重等；生活习性，如饮食或者睡眠习惯等） 1. This panda weighs many times less than the elephant. /An adult panda weighs many times more than a baby panda. 2. At birth, a baby panda is about 0.1-0.2 kilos/15cm long. Its pink and it has no teeth. 3. A panda can live up to 20 to 30

47、years. 4. Adult pandas spend more than 12 hours a day eating about 10 kilos of bamboo. II. 中间大熊猫的生存现状与环境（数量，原因：环境变化；人类活动；优胜劣汰） 1. Many years ago, there were a lot more bamboo forests and pandas in China, but then humans started to cut down these forests. 2. As the forests get smaller and other human

48、 activities cause more problems, pandas cant find enough to eat and they are having fewer babies. 3. When the buying stops, the killing can too. 4. Sometimes they cant fit the change of the environment. III. 结尾保护大熊猫 1. They send people to schools to tell children about the importance of saving these animals. 2. Scientists are doing research to better u