高考英语专项突破读后续写01:成长故事(含答案解析)
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1、专题01高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”-成长故事读后续写“一波三折”:1. 情绪-情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪,借助情绪的延续,以此为衔接,续写。2. 细节-进一步描述。3. 转折-个人的努力或者借助外界的力量,使事情发生转折。4. 转机-事情似乎有了转机,让人抱有希望,心理能感到安慰。5. 失望-问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。6. 想法-面对没有解决的问题或者新问题,突然有了想法或感触。7. 结局-在想法或感触的影响下,事情有了最后的转折/转机。8. 点题-呼应前文备注: 这八步不是固定的,考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序,也可以略写个别环节。此步骤,可让续写有话可说,让情
2、节续写跌宕起伏,前提是要读懂原材料的中心,抓住文章脉络。每个人都会成长。在点点滴滴中,在大风大浪中,在自我挣扎中01阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Heres the story of my growth over the past year. Its a story of how I found the strength to change myself for better and then how I get rid of my fears to be even better. If anyone is inspired by this, tha
3、ts wonderful.Id been stuck as this incredibly insecure, under-confident and just scared individual for years and years. Since childhood Id been stuck like this. Kids I met for the first time looked at me rudely and unkindly. Even my friendsactually, I had very few friends because I just felt too ash
4、amed and frightened to make some, though I was eager to and felt extremely lonely in the depth of my heartlaughed at me and gave me bad nicknames. I felt terrible, but Id just resigned to a life where Id be afraid of everything and be this “introvert” (内向的人) or whatever. I thought I would never be a
5、ble to change, never, for my whole life.But then it all started changing. Something clicked. I suddenly determined to go on a diet, and lost some weight. It was tough. I felt hungry all the time. I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger, even when I didnt see them. But the toughest t
6、hing was that even if I had just had my meals, I felt hunger mentally. However, I held on. In over a period of 6 months I finally managed to stick to one of my diets. I didnt know how. But I did make it.The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight. This isnt the best pa
7、rt. More importantly and inspiringly, I suddenly found strength in me. I realized I could be totally different. And maybe, I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself.Then I wondered, perhaps, I could also get rid of those of my fears, just like I succeeded in
8、losing my extra pounds. It might not be easy, but it might not be that difficult.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Chance presented itself soon._It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly._【答案】Chance presented itself soon. One single time, I heard about a public speaking thing go
9、ing on at my university, and for the first time, I actually managed to build up the courage to go there. It was liberating. For the first time I was able to share my story, and able to do it in front of dozens of people potentially judging me, and suddenly all the random fears about speaking publicl
10、y started disappearing. This taught me I could get rid of my fears.It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly. Using the fact that I could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers
11、, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更
12、好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知,第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。由第二段首句内容“从那时起,我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知,第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后,很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。2.续写线索:公开演讲摆脱恐惧其他改变感悟3.词汇激活 行为类消失:disappear/vanish摆脱:get rid of/extricate oneself from开始:start/begin情绪类害怕:fear/dread【点睛】高分句型1. Using the fact that I could change, and tha
13、t I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. (由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句,现在分词作状语)高分句型2My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing thin
14、gs, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one. (“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)02 Be a true runnerFor me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and
15、 win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, because my camp counselors(辅导员)and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I kn
16、ew I was no ones first choice. I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body tensed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasnt been in other events to
17、 run the two-mile!”He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself from the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him. “But I dont know the way around the lake!” “Youre in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smiled. Bill was my friend
18、and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch(最后一程)on the field, just throw your head back and run.”At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled. “On your mark Get set.” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I stayed close on Bills he
19、els, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!” I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept my eyes on Bill. It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around the lake back to the fi
20、eld. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him. 注意:1续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置。In a moment, Bill was up again and running._I didnt know when I crossed the finish line._【答案】In a moment, Bill was up and running. I couldnt think of anything
21、but to follow him closely. I could even feel the air hitting my face and I was totally worn out. Naturally, my pace slowed down. Just at the moment, Barrys words “Just follow Bill” called me back. Convinced that I was no longer a loser, I refreshed up again and accelerated and soon I was quite close
22、 to Bill again. Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line. The gun cracked again, announcing the last 200 meters. I closed my eyes, threw my head back and ran with my last ounce of strength, in the direction of the dream line.I didnt know when I crossed the line. I still kept running
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