高考英语专项突破读后续写13:校园故事(含答案解析)
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1、专题13高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”校园故事校园,我们每个人成长的摇篮,校园里的故事每日上演01阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Her name was Mrs. Thompson. And as she stood in front of the 5th grade class on the very first day she looked at her students and said that she loved them all the same. But that was impossible because there in the
2、front row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard. Mrs. Thompson had watched Teddy the year before and noticed that he didnt play well with the other children, that his clothes were messy and that he constantly needed a bath. She paid no attention to Teddy.However, when she read his file, she was in s
3、urprise. Teddys first grade teacher wrote, Teddy is a bright child with a ready laugh. He does his work neatly and has good manners.he is a joy to be around. His second grade teacher wrote, Teddy is an excellent student, well liked by his classmates. But he is troubled because his mother has a deadl
4、y illness and life at home must be a struggle. His third grade teacher wrote, His mothers death has been hard on him. He tried to do his best but his father doesnt show much interest. Teddys fourth grade teacher wrote, Teddy is withdrawn and doesnt show much interest in school. He doesnt have many f
5、riends and sometimes sleeps in class.” By now, Mrs. Thompson realized the problem and she was ashamed of herself. She thought that she could make a difference.She felt even worse when her students brought her Christmas presents, wrapped in beautiful paper and tied with pretty ribbons, except for Ted
6、dys. His present was clumsily wrapped in the heavy, brown paper that he got from a grocery bag. Mrs. Thompson opened it in the middle of the other presents. Some of the children stared to laugh when she found a stone bracelet(手镯)with some of the stones missing, and a bottle that was one-quarter full
7、 of perfume.Paragraph 1:Mrs. Thompson, her voice choked up with tears, thanked her students for their presents._Ten years later, Teddy invited Mrs. Thompson to attend his wedding as grooms mother._Mrs. Thompson, her voice choked up with tears, thanked her students for their presents. And then she sh
8、owed how she liked Teddys presents, putting the bracelet on, and using some of the perfume on her wrist. From then on, Mrs. Thompson paid particular attention to Teddy. As she worked with him, his mind seemed to come alive. The more she encouraged him, the faster he responded and he showed much inte
9、rest in study. By the end of the year, Teddy had become one of the excellent children in the class.Paragraph 2:Ten years later, Teddy invited Mrs. Thompson to attend his wedding as grooms mother. She used the bracelet and the perfume which were the present of that year. At the wedding ceremony, she
10、met the man with good manners. He said to her, Thank you, Mrs. Thompson. Today you smelled just like my mom used to. Mrs. Thompson, with tears in her eyes, whispered back. She said, “Teddy, you were the one who taught me that I could make a difference. Im so proud that today I can be your mother!”【解
11、析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了汤普森夫人的班里有一个叫特迪的男孩,她发现这个孩子和其他孩子玩得不好,衣服很脏。当汤普森夫人阅读了特迪的档案后,发现是生活的变故使得这个男孩发生了改变。汤普森夫人意识到了这个问题,她为自己感到羞愧。 她觉得自己能有所作为。 当学生们给她带来圣诞礼物时,她的感觉更糟了,特迪带来了很不同的礼物。【详解】1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“汤普森夫人含泪哽咽地感谢学生们送的礼物”可知,第一段可描写汤普森夫人表现出特别喜欢特迪的礼物。从那以后,汤普森夫人就特别关注特迪。特迪成了班里最优秀的孩子之一。由第二段首句内容“十年后,特迪以新郎母亲的身份邀请汤普森夫人参加他的婚礼”可
12、知,第二段可描写汤普森夫人用的是那年特迪送给她的手镯和香水。特迪和老师见面后,表达自己深藏在内心深处的情感,汤普森夫人和自己的妈妈一样。汤普森夫人同样感激特迪,让自己有所作为,今天成为他的妈妈。2.续写线索:注意阅读档案发现原因决心有所作为表现出喜欢礼物关注以妈妈身份出席婚礼感悟3.词汇激活行为类注意:pay attention to/notice小声说话:whisper/murmur鼓励,激励:stimulate/inspire/impel回应,回答:reply/react情绪类喜欢:like/be fond of骄傲:be proud of/take pride in【点睛】高分句型1 A
13、s she worked with him, his mind seemed to come alive. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)高分句型2 She said, “Teddy, you were the one who taught me that I could make a difference. Im so proud that today I can be your mother!”(运用了who引导定语从句)02Sabrina and I were in gym class together. I was quiet and kind. She was a bully(仗势
14、欺人者). She and her friends enjoyed harassing(骚扰)me on a daily basis.I was less than athletic. That day, we had played soccer. I not only embarrassed myself, I also made Sabrina mad basically because she was on my team, and we didnt win. So, in the shower, she threatened me! “I will meet you after cla
15、ss,” she sneered(讥笑).Immediately class was over, I slid out the teachers entrance and ran to my locker where Susan, my older sister, was already waiting for me, so we could walk home together.“Whats up with you?” she asked, noticing the look of panic in my eyes. “Sabrina!” I choked. “We lost the soc
16、cer game in gym and it was my fault.”“Oh,” Susan simply stated. “Well,” she said, “we will walk down Seventeenth South instead of Harrison. Its out of the way enough that Sabrina wont find us.”Next day, in the math classroom, Sabrinas best friend passed me a note that stated, “At lunch, you will pay
17、 for running away!” I didnt even look up, but I accidentally swallowed my gum and felt a severe pain in my chest. Mr. McKonkie excused me going to the nurses office.Walking down the hall, I felt a slight sense of relief and freedom. But suddenly someone hit me on the shoulder from behind. “You littl
18、e chicken!” Sabrinas voice sneered. I didnt turn around. I started running down the hall. I had no idea what she was going to do and I was extremely scared.Sabrina was now rushing after me. At last, she caught up with me enough to kick the back of my legs, trying to knock me down. In a panic, I swun
19、g around to the stairs. Sabrina was so close to me by then that my sudden change in direction knocked her off balance and she fell down the stairs. I stood there watching her fall.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:At first, I felt a sudden independence and victory. _Paragraph
20、 2:Sabrina never harassed me after that. _【答案】At first, I felt a sudden independence and victory. I sneered and was turning to run away when I noticed that Sabrina struggled to her feet, but failed. Instinct taking over, I thought I must do something. Taking a deep breath, I practically raced down t
21、he stairs and touched her shoulder. “Can I help you?” I asked gently. “I cannot walk.” she moaned bitterly. Then she looked up, her eyes misted with tears. Instantly, I helped her into a standing position, and put her arm around my shoulder. At that moment, she lowered a bit of her body, trying to h
22、ide her inner embarrassment. I patted her on the shoulder, and together we staggered to the nurses office.Sabrina never harassed me after that. We never became friends, but from that moment on at the foot of the stairs, I was convinced that I had earned her respect. She still hated being on my team
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