高考英语写作01:应用文之建议信
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1、应用文01 建议信真题回顾Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。【答案】Dear Editor,Ive learned t
2、hat our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. Im writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students interest and have positive effects on their study and life.Compared
3、to the entertainment , I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve t
4、he quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones horizons, which in turn is beneficial to ones study and the establishment of philosophy of life.Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one han
5、d, it covers ones career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to ones career success in the future.What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Pos
6、t.Yours sincerely,Cheng Fei【解析】这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴,这篇作文要求就校英语报改版的事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容: 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由,根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后,要弄清要点,围绕要点展开,条理要清晰,理由要充分,关键的是在写作的过程中,要注意人称,时态语态和常见的语法问题,文章尽量简洁,在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇,遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用,让文章更上
7、档次。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组,如:share with 和分享,Needless to say不必说, according to 根据, have positive effects on对有积极的影响,in turn反之,take into account将考虑在内,make a great difference to对有很大的影响,in the hope that希望,句式上体现出多变的特点,如:Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning
8、health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句,The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening ones horizons, which in turn is benefici
9、al to ones study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句, What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句,还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。第一部分:说明写信的目的套语:1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in you
10、r new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打
11、算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. Im writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
12、你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5. Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn Englis
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